Reviews for Fractures of the Heart
P.T. Piranha chapter 9 . 3/15/2016
Is this the end? If so, an interesting stopping point. I was not sure what exactly this story was portraying until the last few chapters, but apparently it's not recounting the pre-Ocean Palace portion of the quest, since Magus seems to know Lucca on a personal basis. So it's an entirely new version of events? Interesting.

You have a way with words, and some nice details. Whatever you're doing these days, best of luck.
The Justice and Death chapter 7 . 4/3/2014
This have to continue...i will say, good janus, goes pushing buttons! You will go to year 1000 and you will see crono. Causing a time break...
Guest chapter 8 . 3/12/2014
This is really good! :3 Nice job writing it! Magus is my favorite character :P I'm really curious to see what happens next!
Schala A. Zeal chapter 8 . 11/8/2012
Cliffhanger! Ooooh I'm so romanced by this story!
Schala A. Zeal chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
I certainly envy how descriptive you are with this. And the part of the Prophet losing his scythe did put a grin on my face.
Schala A. Zeal chapter 6 . 11/8/2012
Who'dve thought I'd actually show anger...
Schala A. Zeal chapter 4 . 11/8/2012
"Alvira?" I... am guessing that is the Queen's name?
Schala A. Zeal chapter 3 . 11/8/2012
This... just got far more interesting... !
Schala A. Zeal chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
This indeed does make me wonder about the Alfador that was.
Schala A. Zeal chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Very symbolic and foreshadowing. I like it!
toraneko-chan chapter 8 . 4/13/2012
Excellent job, and well worth the wait! I can't wait to read more. Good job!
AlfadortheCat chapter 7 . 4/5/2012
I know that all-praise reviews tend to not help at all, but I haven't found anything wrong with this story. You use great descriptions- not having too little or too much, the characters are developing nicely, and the plot seems great so far. Your words also flow very well. I like your writing style. :D I can't wait for the next update!
toraneko-chan chapter 6 . 10/19/2011
I'm so glad you updated! Such a nice chapter!
AlfadortheCat chapter 6 . 10/18/2011
I read this during class because I couldn't wait to read it at home. I'm glad you didn't rush the chapter. I think it's better short and well written than long and half assed.
AlfadortheCat chapter 5 . 5/11/2011
Yay! Please update soon :D
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