Reviews for patterns of ash and metal
Jemennuie chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
I haven't really seen much of Avatar (at least not enough to know who this character is), and I still love this piece-you write so amazingly poetic-ly.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
This is so simply beautiful, how you take away her innocence and ignorance. And thank you for writing about Smellerbee, who is so often neglected!
eighth chakra chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
My gosh, this is breathtaking.
in sync chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
so wonderful. it was pretty yet harsh - exactly like Smellerbee, I think. the way you described her past was just down right lovely.
Rosawyn chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
That was actually really good. Gave me chills at the end.
CherryFlavoredChalk chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
I think I forgot how your writing is so wonderful to me, always.
waterlit chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
This was a great imagining of Smellerbee's past life. It's different and sad and poignant (:
chandelure chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Smile. This is so pretty, yet harsh — something you could really believe when it comes to Smellerbee. I love her, even though you don't really see her often, because she's such an unique character, and you can almost make up her past; which is really awesome.

Anyway, I love this. And I forgive you. :)