|Reviews for Toeing the Line|
| LiL-Princess-Of-Death chapter 1 . 9/14
This is just to cute! You should really continue!
| Lenora Jime chapter 1 . 7/31
It's amusing to see that tenten is always far too cautious to sasuke's effort to talk to her. Maybe because it would be too OOC for someone like sasuke asks a girl out :)
Thanks for good read and see ya :)
| thelastfight chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
So I don't usually go for sasuten, but I gotta say, this was DEFINITELY worth it! Haha, totally great premise, and hilarious to boot! I like how at the end Sasuke yelled he ate brains for supper. TOO FUNNY hahaha.
| Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Haha that was hilarious haha
| Immortal Bubblewrap chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
BEST. ONESHOT. EVER!
| Pugzy chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
this story is sooooo cute! keep on trying, this is my favorite pairing!
| Leesj1 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Cute & hilarious :)
| princesshyuuga01 chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Lol that was cute; only u know how to write such epic little sasuten tales. Haha i LOVE SASUTEN! Great job
| kratos's appreintice chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Ah, here we go. A fluffy story featuring my pairing whore. Remember, no matter what they tell you, you can never have too much fluff
| naash chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
lol sasuke is wonderful here. i love how interesting he makes his stories to hischild
| HOY chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I'm going to get you, Tenten! I eat brains for supper! Hahaha. I'm rather fond of this pairing. Also, Neji and Tenten (way too common) and Gaara and Tenten.
| pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Hahah, cute story. ;)
| Alusy chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
LMAO. I love this!
| Sasuke4Tenten chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I really like this. Hahahah. (: Keep on making SasuTen!
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| Bloody Sapphire Blade chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
ROFLMBO! XD EPIC!