|Reviews for He Belonged With Me|
| Invariant chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Holy FUCK! This was AMAZING! Loved it! So beautiful and wrenching and FANTASTIC! Thank you!
| Lu78 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
This is amazing, I love it. Only just found it. I loved this scene int eh episode and now reading your story i can almost live it again. You can feel her sorrow and hurt, thanks again for writing it.
| Queen of Tortall chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Poor Olivia. This was really touching! Good job.
| Laumimi chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Really heart-breaking, but so well written as well! :)
| Fan chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
What you said about indifference being the opposite of love is entirely true, and it's wonderful that you used it as what Olivia clearly wasn't feeling.
| ineveryavenue chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Amaziiiiiiing 3 A little sad (I almost cried) but I loved it :)
| twhiddleston chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
That was so great and sad D:
I feel really sorry for our-Liv... Hope they can end up fine 7-7
| Miss Mila chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
"Because the opposite of love isn't hate – it's indifference."
That was an amazing line; I really love it.
I think you did a great job portraying Olivia's emotions in this. It felt very...real.
Although, the way I interpreted her crying scene is that she lost it when she opened the washing machine and saw his MIT shirt there. That seeing his clothes there made her break.
| Lanmwolf chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Really beautifully written! Based on the preview you captured so much of what I think Olivia is going to experience. Normally I'm not a huge fan of first person (it usually seems as though people use it as an excuse for lazy writing), but you wrote it so flawlessly that I felt like I was in Olivia's head, feeling what she was feeling. And your dedication to detail was amazing! I felt like I could see the note that Altlivia had written, see and smell the sheets. Awesome job! You should try doing one from Peter's perspective! Keep up the great work!
| jayley chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
well, you've definitly made me really depressed for the outcome of this whole debacle...i mean i agree, it's defintely gonna set back the relationship for real olivia and peter by like, seasons if the show lasts. though i really hope it's not nearly as bad as this. good job though
| AkaiChaos chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Awesome job! I really liked it and I could see something along this line happening in the story. I can see Olivia being hurt that no one noticed how different Fake-Olivia was. What I thought was interesting was that Peter did notice all the differences he just didn't connect the two.
Anyways I really like this one and I look forward to reading your other works.
| lucky-fin chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Oooooooo I loved it! Very well written and in-character.
And heart-breaking. :(
| mara lena chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
although i find this very sad, i guess, it would be so good if it happens like this. if olivia is building this walls again, they won't get together in the near future...
i totally want it to happen like you imagined! like your writing, please give us a chapter from Peter's POV!
| LittleGooseWalking chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
WOW! I love this. Its exaclty how you'd think Olivia would react. I can't wait for next week's episode,5 days is too long :(
| meghan chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
ahhhmmyyyygod. I hope a confrontation like this happens in the show! Exactly like this too! Loved it