Reviews for The Return
PowerLad chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Hell I'm going back and reading all these stories I've missed...You have to continue this. I wanna see your take on how Mercedes Handles this.
Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
oh, wow! i like this take on things.

(heehee, Mercedes is so intuitive. i love it.) C:
noburningliberacemannequins chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Please, please continue this! It's really well written, and I want to know what happens next.
hillabilla chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
i really think you should continue this. you have great skill, and i would love to read more, if you were willing. great job!