|Reviews for Emotions of War|
| neonorne chapter 4 . 12/22/2010
You need to continue this. It really works. I'm very exited to see how you will do his turning traitor.
Also - I like the chapter titles. One emotion for each, tying into the title of the story. Nice.
| neonorne chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
Poor Peter - you really make us feel for him here...
| neonorne chapter 2 . 12/22/2010
Very good as a short portrait of a character. Very believable, too. He wants to achieve, to prove himself, to outgrow his protected childhood - but he may not be able too...
| neonorne chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Good beginning. Eager to read more now.
Just a bit of nitpicking: Canon has it Sirius and James were the best students in their year. Not Lupin. Fandom has this idea that Lupin was the most studious one just because we see him sitting with a book in Snape's Worst Memory. But Sirius says he doesn't need to review because he *knows* all of that already...
| IronSpockMaster chapter 4 . 12/21/2010
Wow. That bit at the end was written so well that it actually shocked me, and everything was going so fast...
And the anger in this by the end...
| IronSpockMaster chapter 3 . 12/15/2010
N'aaw poor Peter :'( I don't like his character, but this chapter really made me think. It shows why he turned out how he did, and it actually makes me feel sorry for him. That's an achievement xD Well done.
| IronSpockMaster chapter 2 . 12/8/2010
I liked both of these. I think that Peter is a very deep, complex character that JK painted as the bad guy (she needed to of course). I can't wait for some more of these.
| angiedotdotla chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
and yet, he still betrays James and Lily.