Reviews for Gates of Revolution
Ryo-Wolf chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
My only beefs are that the ice glaive was the Gekkaja, and that english seems to be your second language. great story though, really bad grammar and yet somehow it was well written. Get yourself a decent pre-reader and you'll be in business.
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
So/so. It lacks something. I do like the idea of Kasumi

being the queen of the silver millenium tho' *grin*
blaze chapter 1 . 9/25/2002
I like this story please continue it.
arron henry chapter 1 . 3/14/2002
great story
arron henry chapter 1 . 3/14/2002
great story
Random Helper chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
No idea how you got Denki as light. Light in Japanese is Hikari. And if you're going for someone named Dragon of Light, go the Sailor Moon way and name them Hikarino Ryuu or something like that.
personaldreamer chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
Looks good I cant wait to read more _
rave chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
oh evil evil evil how could you stop at such a cliff hanger i demand you write the next chapter now!... please *puppy dog eyes*
Khurrum chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
Interesting story. I had a feeling that you were gonna make Ranma the avatar of silence in his girl form(thank god you didn't).

anyway should be interesting. though Ranma being king of the dark kingdom was a nice thought. Maybe he can turn evil and then take the others place(or perhaps merge with him)

anyway, good luck, and keep writing
Tola chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
good start but it would have been better of ranma got to see his family one more time before he die. continue this please.
Rmorletd chapter 1 . 3/12/2002
Nice piece of a fic. Seems to be real original.

I hope you will try a continue it.