Reviews for Teacup Tempest
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19
Fabulous
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8
I'm pretty opening this fic put me on a list somewhere. Ya'll people better not be living near any elementary schools.
dragongirl92 chapter 1 . 9/9
Ahhhhhh would love to see more of this as naruto merges into Makis age. Raising hito and the marriage and everything 3 3 3
Andrew chapter 1 . 9/7
Really interesting story, now I'm checking your profile for more.
Yuna Nightshade chapter 1 . 8/11
Nooooooooooooooooo, this just can't be over yet

I love it! I totally love it!

I wanna read more of this glorious, wonderful, magnificent and extraordinary fanfiction!

How you wrote Naruto as a girl, while keeping who he/she is intact (and didn't call her Naruko, who the hell even came up with that sh**, his name is Naruto regardless of gender!), her interactions with Kakashi and Hito (OMG how did this get so kawaii? How can something kawaii like this even exist?!), how you managed to include Anko, Kurenai, Asuma, Guy/Gai etc. in a wonderfully thought of context, how you wrote that scene where Kakashi told Sakura what is expected of her as a ninja and that it isn't just a game (I thought my heart would explode, this scene was so EPIC if you know what I mean), the OC's like Hito and Mito were also well written (Hito ) and lastly how you wrote the scene with Kakashi asking Maki/Naruto to marry him...

Oh, I would really, REALLY love to read a continuation, this is just too good
Maybe about how the others find out, or generally the Naruto plot, but this would make such a good fanfiction (you might have noticed how much I love, no, WORSHIP this fanfiction.

Best fanfiction ever, no compromises.
Homework9 chapter 1 . 7/31
This is the second weirdest thing I’ve read and the first was a Shrek smut (not on purpose)
sgriffin730 chapter 1 . 7/29
that was sooo wonderful
sgriffin730 chapter 1 . 7/29
that was sooo wonderful
Tajha Davis chapter 1 . 7/7
Hey
Donald Vici chapter 1 . 6/21
This story is so fucking amazing...i actually cried at the ending of d story
Kage-Shino chapter 1 . 5/28
HOLY SHIT HE'S MIZUKI'S SON- THAT BITCH LEMME AT HIM
ALSO I NEED MORE OF THIS DRUG SHIT
BLINIX chapter 1 . 5/11
Ok, this was wholesome.
istane99 chapter 1 . 5/8
ok ... thank you.
reptoholic chapter 1 . 4/5
Fucking awesome
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9
I don’t normally like kakanaru but I’ll make an exception for this one. I mean, haven’t you thought that kakanaru makes Kakashi like a pedophile? This is the only non time travel one I actually like. I like the angst as well. That seems to be your stlye. Oh and thanks for the super long story. It is a bit annoying sometimes but it’s great.
Sorry I’m babbling so much. I get like this sometimes. Fox out.
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