|Reviews for Protector|
| WhiteElfElder chapter 10 . 11/9/2013
This story had a lot of promise to be ended, glad it was adopted.
| gwesntarr chapter 10 . 8/14/2013
I'm so sorry for your loss. Glad to see someone continuing her story.
| Jasper's Mom chapter 4 . 7/10/2013
This is a good story but I"m a little mixed up here. In Ch. 1 Gibbs is told Harry is not quite two but can already read and is potty trained. In chapter 3 they go buy educational books to help him learn letters and to read. They buy a diaper bag. In ch. 4 Gibbs packs diapers to take Harry to work. I think you need to go back and just take out the sentence in ch. 1 saying he can read and is potty trained. I'd suggest 'Harry is learning to use the potty and loves to look at books. " That way everything you have after will flow together. :}
| fanficfantasies chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Great job! Just one thing. It's "...and training is self defense." not "self defiance". :p :)
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 9 . 6/9/2013
Aww. Crap. And I was excited for the next chapter. This was exceptionally well done. I enjoyed it.
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Cute. I'm happy for him. And hopefully the nurse can bust those people
| jeanette9a chapter 9 . 5/21/2013
that's fine, i would never ask my siblings to continue something that they feel they can't.
| stonegnome1 chapter 9 . 5/18/2013
It is a shame you are not continuing this. You plot well and only need a friend or beta to proof it for typoes etc. Please post a notice if it gets adopted.
| stonegnome1 chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
I always wondered why Ducky was such a fine coroner. A fair number of dose for does. You might have a friend read the story before you post it.
Very nice story.
| stonegnome1 chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
interesting elemental choice. broad but not deep.
what dose it means when his name came up Meadownight's
Gibbs finances are not mentioned on the show, I wonder if Gringotts has an american branch.
| stonegnome1 chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
I wonder if any magical will have the brains to go to Grunnings,(if they know Vernon works there).
| stonegnome1 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I wonder what will happen to Vernon and Petunia when Dumbles finds them. Cute that Veernon thinks he can escape by leaving the country especially as he remains an employee of Grunnings.
Nurse Jenny looked after the little ones and gave all the new kids a check up to start their files.
Too much pokemon, will we see officer Joy? (I know it is nurse Joy and officer Jenny but that is how it struck me.)
Even though you can't due magic
Do, curse all homonyms.
| Lendor chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Jenny is a character of too much convenience. It is obvious that she was just created to make the plot work how you want. Thing should have, in my opinion, been broken up more. Ie. Jenny gets Harry out of the orphanage but his magic and name are discovered later by someone else. For Jenny to be undercover in an orphanage, know Gibbs and Know about magic (even having family in England so she recognizes Harry) is TOO convenient. Other then this, great writing skills and wonderful plot ideas!
| PhantomBowtie chapter 9 . 5/18/2013
awwwww...I don't know enough about it to adopt, so I'll really miss it :(
| Inflamora Notoris chapter 9 . 5/17/2013
I could try. NCIS is my fave tv show...
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