|Reviews for At the Bus Stop,|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
Awww! I loved this. It's hard to come across ones like these, they're rare and golden. It was so much fun to read and so cute, I wanted to just keep reading about their interactions. Good job!
| igeisha chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Surprisingly good for your so called 'first attempt'.
| exogenesissymph chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
nagihiko nagihiko nagihiko nagihiko
you're right! it is fuuunnnnn.
nagihiko nagihiko nagihiko...
:P should stop now and give appreciation for good story.
| WeirdyTheFangirl chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
too... much... fluff...
But I like it ;)
| papaya-san chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
| BuBuBoom chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
*sigh* I am extremely DISSAPOINTED in you. Yes, you brilliantliex3. Now I know why your name is brilliant-lie.
You totally plagiarized this. The original is from startscribbling12 who wrote it back in January 2010 titled 'Bus Stop'.
Since you posted this in December 2010 (eleven months later), it's obvious you copied. You just added the Saturday and Sunday and replaced the characters names.
First Whispers Down the Alley and now this. *sigh*
I know it's been 2 years, so I'm not sure if this is worth reporting. I just wanted to tell you this because it wasn't fair to the original author, startscribbling12 that you copied her story without permission and taking credit for her work.
I PM-ed her, so she already knows.
| HaibaraAiFan chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
i like it so much i was disappointed when it finished D:
| Tish95 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
This was really... sweet! Honestly, this is the first time I've read a Rimahiko fic and actually felt genuinely pleased when it was over. Kudos to you
It was a little bit OOC at times I guess, but only slightly and personally I didn't mind it at all. The point of view never affects me, as soon as you don't change it all the freaking time. From person to person is alright, I guess, but from first person to third person is practically unbearable.
Anyways, you did well.
And as a side note, I totally tried typing his name that way immediately after reading it. It is pretty fun XD
| lazy chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
had to press this new-ish obnoxious REVIEW button... and it looks like yu havnt had a review in a while... so ill make it an even 30... but yeah... awesome story. amazing. i stopped reading rimaxnagi fics awhile ago but im glad i stumbled upon this, its very well done !
| ShortieMonster chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Awww! This story was really cute! I really like how it all happened at a bus stop! It was super cute and really sweet!
| outerchara13 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
let's just say that i couldn't stop reading :)
i mean...not like that...it's just...
how do i say this...
| lovelybluerose06 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
im to lazy to sign in ; i love this story ! continue on with all your stories!
I WASNT TALKIN TO YOU NAGI!
| Free Parking chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Ohmygoodness this was delightful.
It was hardly OOC, and I thought it really worked with the AU.. Which I adore..
Now I want to meet the man of my dreams at a bus stop..
& the formatting was reull cute~
| tnygrl-happiness.matters chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
that was... sweet :) I liked it a lot! I've been feeling down lately because of problems and tests -_- so Thanks, that made me feel better :)
| it's me chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
mwahahaha i am reviewing ur BRILLIANT (get it?) story!
basicallyy it was amazing. simply amazing. u really have a gift, i dont usually like oneshots but this was like a story and so much happened in just a few thousand words and i love it. nd i dont think they were ooc at all!