|Reviews for The First Hero|
| Spades24 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
omg so so funny, loved it. Wonder what Modo came up with that was so embarrassing...? *Grins*
| LuffyMarra chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
This was too funny. I loved it.
| B.C. Crossing chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Hilarious! I loved how you portrayed Stoker. Poor Charley, terrified of hiccups. But I'm sure she will sic Stoker on the boys for something they did. Loved it
| delunatic chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
loved this! you did "The Firsts" proud! Keep it up! Write Free!
| Morning chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
this is fantastic. It's been so long since I sat down and just enjoyed a good BM read and there are some wonderful stories that have been added to this page this being one of the best so far. Thnks for sharing the talent.
| Kashito91 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I approve! :D
| The Third Biker Scholar chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
still wonderful and awesome, dear Lu. love it!