Reviews for The First Hero
Spades24 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
omg so so funny, loved it. Wonder what Modo came up with that was so embarrassing...? *Grins*
LuffyMarra chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
This was too funny. I loved it.
B.C. Crossing chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Hilarious! I loved how you portrayed Stoker. Poor Charley, terrified of hiccups. But I'm sure she will sic Stoker on the boys for something they did. Loved it
delunatic chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
loved this! you did "The Firsts" proud! Keep it up! Write Free!
Morning chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
this is fantastic. It's been so long since I sat down and just enjoyed a good BM read and there are some wonderful stories that have been added to this page this being one of the best so far. Thnks for sharing the talent.

Kashito91 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I approve! :D
The Third Biker Scholar chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
still wonderful and awesome, dear Lu. love it!