|Reviews for Hidden Sunray|
| Misaki789 chapter 8 . 1/18
| BlueIceHime chapter 8 . 1/9
That hit me right in the feels TT
Anyway please update soon! :D
| Becca chapter 6 . 1/1
Hi! Ok so there was one problem with this chapter and it was "Now let's get this party starting" is actually supposed to be "Now let's get this party started" it's a small gramatical error that I thought you would like to know about! Great story by the way, I have read it about four times and I just noticed the error:)
| DayZFlash chapter 8 . 12/15/2013
He should meet Sasuke, especially considering that the massacre didn't happen so Sasuke is his nice yet somewhat bratty kid! :D
| Vanex chapter 8 . 12/9/2013
You can't go wrong with family fluff, especially with this family. October 10th (or The Tragedy of Minato and Kushina, as I sometimes call it) is one of the few things that brings me to tears.
As for the member of the Konoha 12, I don't have a preference.
| minatochan2 chapter 8 . 11/24/2013
;u; yes. I approve of this fluff. It's so beautiful! :DDDD *sob*
| minatochan2 chapter 7 . 11/24/2013
In response to your author's note, the only thing that I think would degrade your writing (which I find to be very beautiful) is how much you repeat words and phrases. You tend to say "smile slipped onto his/her face" a lot. That would be the only thing that I would change at all. I don't quite know what is up with the adverb comment; you could place them either before or after.
Another wonderful chapter as always. :)
| minatochan2 chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
Oh no, Kushina's going to break this sucker like a toothpick. *hides for life* DONT KILL MEEEEEEEE!
| minatochan2 chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
Oh my...gosh ;A; Naruto-feels. Crap! Why did I read this when I knew I'd start crying?!
| minatochan2 chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
Oh dear. I almost thought that Kushina had dyed Kakashi's hair pink or something. The dishcloth was a good addition; you've got a smart friend. :D
| minatochan2 chapter 2 . 11/23/2013
Protective Minato...I vote yes! ;D Super good stuff!
| minatochan2 chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
The first time I read this summary, I completely overlooked it. I kept searching for more things to read as the months dwindled by and I asked myself why this one in particular kept appearing. Today, I finally clicked on it and found the reason. This story has so much emotion behind it that cannot be expressed in a summary. Thank you for posting this and please, continue with it. 3
| Unknown chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
| Terry the Terryble chapter 8 . 10/26/2013
| kairi loves sora chapter 8 . 9/23/2013
Poor Naruto... I feel so sorry for him. He needs to make a friend. Maybe stay with his father while he works. Or bring Rin and Kakashi into it. Rin will love him. But first he has to get some clothes and go to the hospital to get a check up. Also if he is going to meet one of the Konoha 12 try to make it someone quite. But Sasuke is still ok because he seemed ok before his brother leaving. Anyway great story. Oh and I also love how protective Kushina and Minato are. Looking forward to the next chapter. See ya