Reviews for Hidden Sunray
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 8 . 7/17
Oooooooo!
This is so good!
It's interesting and well paced and I can feel all the emotions that you write about and they bounce out and hit me right in the heart!
It's really well written too!
As for the adverb before a word thing you asked about, personally I don't feel that it makes much of a difference
I'm so excited for the next chapter!
Uummmmm maybe he could meet with Sasuke?
Cos then he'd meet Itachi as well
Maybe, unless Sasuke is too old to walk with his brother But still
This is amazing!
I love this so much!
thatsmartchick chapter 8 . 10/11/2016
Oh my goodness, you are amazing. I started reading this story and then I couldn't stop! If you ever decide to continue this story, I will defiantly read it!
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 7/1/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 7/1/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 7/1/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 6/30/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 6/30/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/30/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/30/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 8 . 5/6/2016
Hello. I love this story. If you could plz help me. I am looking for a fanfiction and I can't remember what the name is. It is where minato and Mishima live but naruto is stolen right after the kyung is sealed within him. The guy who stole him out an amulet around his neck to hide his eyes whiskers and hair. He didn't meet his father till he was in the academy and he has a friend cat who he can talk to. It would be most appreciated if you would tell me what that is if you know private message me on Wattpad. At KatiePitts or ShipperLover24000 plz and thank you
Treanna Hatake chapter 8 . 12/24/2015
CONTINUE IT. PLZ!
naruto kurama chapter 8 . 2/6/2015
Poor Naru-chan! can't wait for more chapters.
procon chapter 8 . 11/25/2014
Its fucking adorable and i love it! I hope you decide to continue, ill be here waiting for it!
anonymous chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
um I thought you should know, you might want to check out "Something to Fill the Hole by CrimsonLotus12501"

their story is VERY similar to yours it's basically the same except all worded differently, and not as well written...I actually at very first thought it was your story but then realized something wasn't right about it..
Guest chapter 8 . 10/11/2014
This is amazing just found it and it's awesome u must continue
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