|Reviews for In Transit|
| gatorgrl91 chapter 6 . 5/17/2012
Love this story-can't believe it's only 7 chapters. Ur keeping it real!
Oh- My hubby already does the grocery shopping, the laundry AND the cooking! Yeah-I feel special!
| allidel chapter 7 . 1/28/2012
Wow - that was such a wonderful little novella! I loved it all, from beginning to end! Thank you both for sharing it! :)
| jane-with-a-y chapter 7 . 1/5/2012
I decided to re-read this novella last night and I am so glad that I did. You and Lillybellis have been greatly missed by me in this fandom. This particular story was very special to me (probably in my top ten favorites of all time!)It's been nearly a year since you completed it and I wish more than anything you two would write a little epilogue!
| Random Cowgirl chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
Okay, to start off, I love quite a few of your stories, they never disappoint. I can't wait to see where this one leads :)
And an answer to the worst someone has misjudged me...I would say I have had a couple of guys think I am some sort of High Class Hooker. I am not stuck-up but I don't generally like people who are doing the wrong things(drugs, ect) so I avoid them. Hence High Class. One guy actually said I would be a 5* Hooker and be more into the political and wealthy guys. But I am also a very big flirt by nature, so guys usually think of me as an easy target. Not always the best bet and total opposite of me, considering I am as Southern Belle as you can get for around here...I have big morals that stand no where near what they think of me.
| lullaby369 chapter 7 . 11/27/2011
so cute! they deserved their perfect ending.
| sibilantspiel chapter 7 . 11/13/2011
Short and sweet, yes, but infinitely meaningful. I deeply enjoyed this story; realising your mistakes and owning up to when you need help is such an intimate lesson of life, and that really struck a chord with me.
Thank you for writing this.
| sibilantspiel chapter 5 . 11/13/2011
I love their tenderness. It's heartwarming. :)
| sibilantspiel chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Beautifully written and sweetly plotted so far.
| BnSA chapter 7 . 10/18/2011
This story was amazingly sweet. And a different Jasper and Alice for sure. Great characters in Edward (swoon) and Bella. Thanks for the ride-it was great.
| shelllynn22 chapter 7 . 9/22/2011
Very good story and well executes.I normally don't read anything under 100,000 words but since BAT was so good i couldn't resist seeing how this one turned out and was glad i did(especially since i am an army wife with a husband who is currently deployed)I understood it in ways people who haven't ever been where i am wouldn't.
| Nehnah14 chapter 7 . 8/21/2011
You know, for a short, this was beautifully written.
The detail you managed to get in there in 7 short chapters was astounding.
I've read a few shots in my time and have always come away thirsting for more detail, but you nailed it on the head!
Thank you for this story. I loved it!
Any chance of a short epi-outtake on their future?
| MoniMD chapter 7 . 8/10/2011
I loved this little fic something fierce.
It was so well written. Thanks to both of you.
| MoniMD chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
Edward is a judgmental asshole who seems to be putting a lot of energy on self pitting.
| hallelujahbaby chapter 7 . 7/26/2011
I really enjoyed this fic... sweet and satisfying and beautifully told. Thank you! I hope you keep writing.
| Iklepixie chapter 7 . 7/25/2011
Great workings of an angsty edward