Reviews for In Transit
Cina's chapter 7 . 1/24/2011
Loved it thanks fir sharing
IzzyRP chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
wow! is a pleasure to read something like this

is very nice story

is the first story I read in English which is not a one shot and I love it
insanemum chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
This is a really beautiful story - I'm so glad that I read it. Just perfect.
Elvire23 chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
Short, but very sweet.
DownThatLayne chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
just beautiful in every way, thank you for writing xoxo
atbatbatb chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
SkyBraker chapter 7 . 1/22/2011
Were all those puns put there on purpose or am I reading in too it way too much? Anyway- I loved it. It was sweet and even though it didn't look like it was going to be HEA at the start it did end that way. Aaaw. *sigh* It's so sweet.

..I guess that's it. O_o

Crimson08 chapter 7 . 1/21/2011
I see that I jumped the gun a bit in my first review. I'm glad that Bella found a way for Edward to help her, one that didn't feel like charity. Honestly, I'm kinda irritated when certain aspects of SM's universe bleeds over into fanfic, like Bella's stubbornness / pride...I had knee jerk reaction of sorts.

Also, this story was wonderful in its realness. I feel like I know these people, or, if I don't, I could know them. In other words, they aren't caricatures.
Crimson08 chapter 5 . 1/21/2011
I'm annoyed with Bella at the moment. I understand why she didn't want Edward's help but she's operating from a double standard. It was o.k. for her to help Edward with Jasper but it wasn't o.k. for him to return the favor? Her logic is kinda exasperating. I don't know, maybe I'm misreading the situation, but what Edward did for her was exactly what she did for him which is jumping in to help without a request to do so.

I'm enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to this journey with your characters as they continue to grow. Seriously, I love, love, LOVE character growth and your characters are certainly going through that.
GaelleLovesMax chapter 7 . 1/21/2011
I really enjoyed this story. It was unusual and very well-written, it's definitely one of my fav short stories!
In.Between.The.Lines chapter 7 . 1/20/2011
Watching their relationship was heart-warming to read. Love this story to pieces.
Tdot TwiFic chapter 7 . 1/20/2011
If it is the end of the line, the bus driver would have said last stop, everybody off. That didn't happen so I don't believe you.

Ok, maybe I should or I will just hurt myself. Thank you for writing. It was all very sweet and heartwarming, except the war part, but sometimes necessary to tell a story with all the information.
jarkin33 chapter 7 . 1/19/2011
so sad it's the end for these two but it was written beautifully and I loved the story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us.


GeekMama Bee chapter 7 . 1/19/2011
Oh. That was a lovely story. You did a great job walking the line between sweet and angst. I liked especially when E. was thinking about how love can be a smile in class when you know you're going to see your girl. That entire bit touched me. I hope to read more from you.

feedmemore chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
That was a lovely story.

Thank you.
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