Reviews for In Transit
Tdot TwiFic chapter 7 . 1/20/2011
If it is the end of the line, the bus driver would have said last stop, everybody off. That didn't happen so I don't believe you.

Ok, maybe I should or I will just hurt myself. Thank you for writing. It was all very sweet and heartwarming, except the war part, but sometimes necessary to tell a story with all the information.
jarkin33 chapter 7 . 1/19/2011
so sad it's the end for these two but it was written beautifully and I loved the story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us.


GeekMama Bee chapter 7 . 1/19/2011
Oh. That was a lovely story. You did a great job walking the line between sweet and angst. I liked especially when E. was thinking about how love can be a smile in class when you know you're going to see your girl. That entire bit touched me. I hope to read more from you.

feedmemore chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
That was a lovely story.

Thank you.
Groovechild1964 chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
Just read this story and loved it (of course). It was definately a great example of why you shouldn't judge a book by its cover (no pun intended there).

I loved the strong Bella who took charge and came to Edwards rescue in the cafe, especially after he was exceptionally rude to her on the bus. Nothing like a little dose of kindness to jump start your brain in the right direction.

I have thoroughly enjoyed all of your stories and am looking forward to what you have in store next. Thanks for writing!
iahgjioag chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Profmom72 has this exact same story up
Hadley Hemingway chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
I've loved this - I would love a sequel/continuation of this someday but thank you for "gifting" us with this very sweet story!
momma23 chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.
grabadietcoke chapter 7 . 1/18/2011
This chapter was so damn sweet - the making up with his family and that album, the way he let is slip that he loved her.

I really thought the line about his favorite underwear was cute and this one "I love you, too," I replied, because once you give someone your heart, you never want to stop reminding them that it's theirs.

I like how you managed to cram in a lemon that was romantic without being graphic, a future where she and Charlie are both safe, happy and seemingly in better monitary status and a sweet peek into their HEA and back on the bus. It was really well written, not crammed, not rushed. Lovely.
grabadietcoke chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
I always love when Charlie and Edward get along. I didn't like that he was so anti-Edward in the Twilight books - I get it off the bat but long term it was really old and made Charlie look stupid in my opinion. I like how you made him smart - challenging but accepting when he could clearly see an honest man in front of him. (okay, I get that Edward was a vampire in Twilight...but Charlie had no clue and every other indicator was that he was a good guy...)
Galathea82 chapter 7 . 1/17/2011
Very awesome story

thank you!1
deleteme.deleteme.deleteme chapter 7 . 1/17/2011
Loved it! ur a great writer! :D
DeeDreamer chapter 7 . 1/17/2011
This might have been the sweetest, most sincere, most realistic story I've read in ages. I adored it to no end. Thank you for sharing your talents with us, ladies! Much love. xo ~DD
DeeDreamer chapter 6 . 1/17/2011
Charlie is perfection. xo ~DD
DeeDreamer chapter 5 . 1/17/2011
My heart just melted a little bit. And I'm teary-eyed. And I love it. xo ~DD
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