Reviews for In Transit
Lost In Belgium chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
A lovely little romance! Great story
orlanka chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
loved this story. I loved the reconcilliation between Edward and his family. And the first "I love you's" between Edward and Bella. Great story. :)
floryp chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
Thank you for writing this girls! It was perfect!
midsouthmama chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
what a lovely story. thank you so much for sharing it with us! i really enjoyed reading it...
ickaren chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
I already told you I loved your story, so now I want to thank both of you for writing it, and Mujisan for sharing it! It was wonderful to see two such deserving people make each other happy, and include those around them in their happiness.
montannaleigh chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
awesome chapter, beautiful ending :)
oneiros lykos chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
I loved this story and love the ending. I sort of wish we'd heard a little more about Edward's past and time in the service just to understand him more. Otherwise, very enjoyable.
ickaren chapter 6 . 1/15/2011
I love it! But I don't think I am ready for it to end. Although you are both doing an amazing job of writing a well-balanced short story, I am just enjoying it too much...
ickaren chapter 5 . 1/15/2011
Mmmph, that chapter have me heartichokes, they are both so proud yet needy and wanting.
ickaren chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
Ooh, there's the assumptions again, that he has this loving family, maybe ideal background... How will he react to this?
ickaren chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
I like the break in the walls. Their interaction was sweet.
ickaren chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
Sometimes, even if we are good at assessing other people, we make the wrong assumption. I wonder if he learned anything different about her during her phone call...
ickaren chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Fast start to the story, and I like it.
Georgiana08 chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Everything wrapped up genuinely, nothing too perfect or cloying.
dreamiedreamer chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
Thank you very much for this lovely story.
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