|Reviews for In Transit|
| o2b18 chapter 7 . 10/26/2012
Beautifully written and very tender. Thanks
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/7/2012
Warmed my heart! You have a gift
| shaz308 chapter 7 . 9/25/2012
This was a lovely story. Thanks. Looking forward to more of your work.
| shaz308 chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
Glad the meeting with Charlie went well. Looking forward to reading more.
| shaz308 chapter 5 . 9/25/2012
I hope it's a great promise.
| shaz308 chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
EDward is becoming the man he could be. I love how he gave her flowers. Very creative.
| shaz308 chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
Bella really is a lovely person. Edward is lucky to have found her.
| shaz308 chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
This Edward is very judgemental. Looking forward to reading more.
| shaz308 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I found this story on the lemonade stand. Looking forward to reading more.
| twiclare chapter 7 . 9/22/2012
I really enjoyed this, lovely story quite different from the usual run of the mill. Beautifully written. Thank you.
| martyni chapter 7 . 9/18/2012
I used to ride the bus to work everyday & I loved your comments about the regular riders. Great story.
| somethinglikegumption chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
This story, as usual, was perfectly written.
As a law student who rides the bus between work and school, I can completely identify with the feelings of both Edward and Bella in this story. I've read all of your stories and they are some of my absolute favorites. You have a gift for words. I can't believe I hadn't discovered this gem until now (thanks to The Lemonade Stands's weekly recs)- I had just gotten off the bus and was especially thoughtful about some of the regulars' back stories so it really was perfect timing to read!
Thank you for sharing- your stories are incredible!
| papierne.ersatzwelt chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
Intriguing story. I saw it mentioned on The Lemonade Stand and I am glad I did.
| dbpbatm chapter 7 . 9/10/2012
Lovely little read. Thank you for sharing it!
| syram chapter 7 . 8/1/2012