Reviews for In Transit
giraffelashes chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
Love that he was reading a Spiderman comic book.
giraffelashes chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Wow. Poor Bella. I remember the feeling of getting on the school bus and finding a place to sit. Awful feeling.
Nic.93 chapter 7 . 6/4/2011
I liked that this fic was short and sweet and that with the two of you collaborating, the POV's were completely seperated.

I'm kind of glad that this was wrapped up where it was, because the way they were in the end, was a complete contrast to the way they were in the beginning.

Nic.
Molly Dooker chapter 3 . 5/24/2011
smiling.
Molly Dooker chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
pride and prejudice. in reverse. maybe.
Molly Dooker chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
different to what i expected. good different.
getvampy chapter 7 . 5/23/2011
This was absolutely delightful. You fit so much into 7 chapters and yet I did not feel cheated at all. Great job.
Erroneous78 chapter 7 . 5/22/2011
Magic! Simply, truly, beautifully magic. Thankyou x
BehindTheseBrownEyes chapter 7 . 5/5/2011
Really cute story. I enjoyed reading it. I expected you to go into more depth with the whole james thing, but even without that it was a superb story! :)
oh werd chapter 7 . 4/28/2011
Great job guys. Sweet and romantic and very well written.
dreamzuvedward chapter 7 . 4/14/2011
You're writing is always sprinkled with the loveliest lines:

"I love you, too," I replied, because once you give someone your heart, you never want to stop reminding them that it's theirs."

Beautiful.
BlackHairedHunter997 chapter 7 . 4/10/2011
This is such a beautiful story! I loved it very much.
QueenAnnie1 chapter 7 . 4/5/2011
that was really cute, I loved it!
Denny52 chapter 7 . 3/27/2011
That was a very nice story. I loved it. She really showed him the way. Lovely story.
Lee Shananogins chapter 7 . 3/26/2011
AWWWWWWW! this was such a great story! i loved it! good job :D
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