Reviews for In Transit
texas princess chapter 7 . 6/10/2011
""I love you, too," I replied, because once you give someone your heart, you never want to stop reminding them that it's theirs."

This might have been one of the most beautiful lines I've ever read. Ever.

Thank you for this story! Thank you for focusing on Edward and Bella, but still bringing in the family. Thank you for sharing this kickass story with us. :)
texas princess chapter 6 . 6/10/2011
"Only this one makes you smile in the middle of a history class just because you know you're going to see her in fifteen minutes. Only this one makes your heart thump faster and harder every time she walks on the bus. Only this one gets you to make promises you now have no choice but to keep."

Loved this. Loved the meeting with Charlie. Love their kiss goodnight.
texas princess chapter 5 . 6/10/2011
"People talk a lot about love at first sight. It wasn't like that for me. In fact, she didn't impress me at all when I first saw her on the bus. However, in that exact moment, I started to fall in love with her."

Love this. Love this chapter. Love how he always saves her.
texas princess chapter 4 . 6/10/2011
Cute date with even better conversation. I wonder how Edward replies to her inquiries...
texas princess chapter 3 . 6/10/2011
Aw, I loved the way she saved him. Finally his rough exterior is cracking! And the comic book at the end was precious. :)
texas princess chapter 2 . 6/10/2011
These two need to talk! I look forward to their first conversation. :)
texas princess chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
This is so good! I saw this recommended at "A Thousand Leaves" and I look forward to reading the rest! :)

ginkgo00 chapter 7 . 6/9/2011
good story, thanks!
giraffelashes chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
Love that he was reading a Spiderman comic book.
giraffelashes chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Wow. Poor Bella. I remember the feeling of getting on the school bus and finding a place to sit. Awful feeling.
Nic.93 chapter 7 . 6/4/2011
I liked that this fic was short and sweet and that with the two of you collaborating, the POV's were completely seperated.

I'm kind of glad that this was wrapped up where it was, because the way they were in the end, was a complete contrast to the way they were in the beginning.

Molly Dooker chapter 3 . 5/24/2011
Molly Dooker chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
pride and prejudice. in reverse. maybe.
Molly Dooker chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
different to what i expected. good different.
getvampy chapter 7 . 5/23/2011
This was absolutely delightful. You fit so much into 7 chapters and yet I did not feel cheated at all. Great job.
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