|Reviews for The Winds of Time|
| readgold2000yahoo.com chapter 48 . 5h
I just read this story for the first time and enjoyed it. There were a couple of chapters that were a little slow for my taste, but otherwise I found the story to be well written and enjoyable.
| Eagle-Eyes chapter 48 . 5/20
Keep writing as life allows
| lastgirlonearth chapter 1 . 5/2
I like this so far, but you say she looks 18/19 and then a few paragraphs later you say she looks barely 17. I only ever notice shit like this, and I feel like a dick for commenting on it but I mess up on continuity all the time and I notice years later, haha.
| lazy-kaa chapter 28 . 3/26
Somewaht interesting development. At least, it is already sort of action and very risky one...
| lazy-kaa chapter 20 . 3/24
I mostly prefer Harry to be a cat... Maybe large one, but some sort of Russian blue cat... Very loyal and loving cat.
| lazy-kaa chapter 17 . 3/24
No, do not kill Piter. And, please, I hope, that you made Sev and Harry friends in this demention.
| lazy-kaa chapter 16 . 3/24
Actually, you forget about Harry's old wand... I mean the DH wand. And, in fact, Dolohov is from the first war Voldy's guards
| lazy-kaa chapter 15 . 3/24
Yes, I like it too, because it does not go that fast... Just goes pritty.
| lazy-kaa chapter 13 . 3/24
"People are telling me that my story sucks and that I should take it down or never update again." - well, just take your wand and spell Stupify!
| lazy-kaa chapter 12 . 3/24
Everything is realistic in fentesy world :) I like good kisses. Just do not forget about adventures...
| lazy-kaa chapter 8 . 3/24
How much they were stupid... I mean Hermione and Harry. It is not platonic, how many people want to put it.
| lazy-kaa chapter 6 . 3/24
Actually, that is not much polite to ask about reviews. Your storry reads smothly and does not leave much to question. It is just fine and calling ahead. I think that Hermione\s Boggard will be Harry.
| lazy-kaa chapter 2 . 3/24
Actually, I never got the idea about the time. If they go back, then it is already planned by the universe. If they change something, then it is planned by the unniverse.
| lazy-kaa chapter 1 . 3/24
"because I hate Ron/Hermione." - Me too. The start is interesting and catching... Let's see what goes after that.
| Sera chapter 1 . 2/27
Ron's middle name is Bilius not Bilus.