Reviews for Triwizard Champions
Concealed Convict-Act 2 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
A little rushed, but still very good.

Hope you update soon.
darkplayer35 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
It has potential. Please update soon.
tumshie chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
A very nice start, but the French for yes is oui, not qui.
Ninpou chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
nice chapter! looking forward to the next one
Naginator chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Hmm look forward to more, love this pairing
Aaron Leach chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter.
Professor Cheesecake chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
You have some very impressive writing skills there! I liked reading that from Fleur's point of view; it must be interesting going to live at a NEW school for a couple of months.

Couple things: if you're going to change around the story, make sure to mention that it's AU.

Assuming that it wasn't AU up until the end, here are some things you could improve on. Like, Harry was also affected by Fleur when she walked up to him, he just didn't show it AS much as Ron, but he did show it a little.

He's also described as remarkably skinny and scrawny-which is inevitable when you live with people who're starving you.

It followed the book really well, though (until the end, which I'm sure is deliberately AU, unless you've got a different version of the Harry Potter books, for some reason), and I liked reading the same lines as JKR wrote.
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