Reviews for Outsiders
fun chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
sooooo sad at the end! But very well written, loved it!
TOSoldtimer chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Very nice story, I really liked it. Although I'm not quite sure why they bothered to keep their relationship quiet after Kirk retired. Habit? Vulcan disapproval? Too bad Spock ends up a recluse, but quite in character. The mood lingers. Again, very nice.
Doni chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Lovely.
Killingmemory chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
I love your stories. You mix realism and nostalgia so damn well.
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I love outside POV stories. I really like how many people you included and the time frame you covered.
happeyNesS chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
quite liked it
Giggles149 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I just wanted to say that I really like outsider pov stories and this one was exceptional. Thank you :-)
Kiwee chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Psh, no way this many people can be wrong! Or, er, I'm just a fangirl like that? I love the little bits and pieces that people can see about these two and the way Jim and Spock are so distant but comfortable.
Lady Merlin chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Whoa. Nice. Very Nice. I liked the delightful insight. You've managed to give us this PERFECT pictures of bits of their lives and given the reader a brilliant wink while leaving the observer clueless. Wonderful characters. I'd like to steal them someday, if you don't mind. :)

Love,

Lady Merlin
SheWhoWalksInShadows chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
I enjoyed reading your story. To see the relationship from the outside was quite interesting and you managed to convey the various hints beautifully. I am certain I shall like to read it again.

Thank you,

Shadows
Heartsong's Fanfictions chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
One of the best, most beautiful fics I've ever read.

Thank you.

Keep writing,

-Heartsong;
WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
oh poor Spock that is absolutley heartbreaking him living in that house by himself! Very adorable story. Great one shot!
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
oh wow just wow great job i loved it
ShamelessSpocker chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Aww, this was nice! It was all about an older Kirk, which is something you don't see much of around here. I liked how there were little tidbits of K/S that snuck in, almost as an afterthought. (The Vulcan spiced tea was one of the good ones, my favorite being the rose garden.) I liked how the relationship part was handled with dignity. I prefer it that way. And you've got an excellent skill, thinking up all these new people and situations. Great job. Will there be more?
Contort chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I love how subtle this is. It's so intrinsically about Kirk and his older life as Admiral, yet you hardly see him. I always admire stories that use an outside point of view, and yours is amazing. Beautifully well-done, I thank you for sharing this.