|Reviews for Girls night out!|
| tenthdoctor10 chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
You really need work on your writing skills. Very much so. I'm twelve too so don't give me the "I'm 12" excuse.
| Amber Gardner chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
This story is awesome
| Vampire-Lover-Tegs chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
Keep writing please
| ValaEnVash chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
hahahahaha that was lovely and wonderful and i laughed til i cried! wonderful job and keep em coming!
| jcdteenagedream5913 chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
Love it! And the "let's get physical" part reminded me of Gabriella. Lol
| OutcastsAmongOutcasts chapter 2 . 2/16/2011
IM SO FRICKIN CONFUSED!
| Vampire-Lover-Tegs chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Pls pls pls
Can you update this story I love it!
| Torchwood Killer chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
lol Sarah Jane was such a nut in this story good job!
| jcdteenagedream5913 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
"Donna, what are you doing down there?" Gotta love that line
| Ka Ru Aras chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Please, what mayhem could the girls possibly cause without the Doctor figuring it out in time?
*Evil grin* I'd like to find out!
I'd recommend fleshing out the paragraphs more. Maybe describe their expressions, outfits, appearances, etc. That way the readers can get a better view of what's going on, instead of just what's being said.
This story sounds like it'll be a fun idea. The concept of Rose and the good Tenth Doctor being married is appealing, I'll admit. Definitely putting this story on Story Alert. Keep writing!