Reviews for What the Room Requires
secondtimereviewing chapter 3 . 12/10/2010
Thanks for adding on, I really love this story, please continue )
HermioneGranger2020 chapter 3 . 12/9/2010
Amazing chapters so far. It's interesting how ignorant Draco seems to be about his family. Can't wait to read more.
Science-Fantasy93 chapter 3 . 12/9/2010
Wow, this is amazing! I can't wait to read more! :)
FinduilasAlcarin chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
Wow! This is one hell of a story. You are very good at building up a tension. Nothing feels forced and things happens with a reason. I am very exited by what there is to come. Keep up the good work :)
LameDuckling13 chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
wowow this is some plotline :D havent seen this before, and its turning out great

update soon
M chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
Interesting idea. I like the quest format. Drive them forward! Battle more things, more ideas made quaisi real. 3 trials for our heroes!
EMCismylove chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
Oh my gosh. I read the first chapter and really liked it but now I love it! You have given this such a unique twist it's awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! :(
SecretlyScribbling chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
I really like it. ;D

Why does Hermione keep calling Draco, Draco? Doesn't she call him Malfoy?
Sarah1281 chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
I would think that generally Draco does not stop and think before he hurts people. Very evocative chapter. Even if Hermione had remembered the whole time that it wasn't real, seeing people who look like her parents die because of her in a situation she already fears could happen (I can see the traits in her that led her to wiping their memories only a few short months later in canon) would be hard on anyone. And Draco, of course, refuses to acknowledge that whenever he helps her it's because he isn't a completely horrible person and instead pretends to believe it's for his own convenience.
Slytherin Princess 1313 chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
Brilliant chapter again! keep it up because i will be severely disappointed! i love your writing and ideas!
SlytherinPrincessxXx chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
Ooh, that was so intense! Loved it! I could feel Hermione's fear, Draco's confusion, and both of their anger as I read it. Beautifully written. Write more soon :)
TragicSlytherin chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
The abyss? No, not quite... but definitely a sort of deceptively large and fortunately rather empty dungeon. But do carry on. It makes things a bit more entertaining for those of us waiting for liberation, however temporary it may prove to be.
Earelwen chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
Yikes, poor Hermione's having a rough day! Not that Draco's is all chocolate and roses... Am loving this story. Definitely keep sending it out! You're also getting in more of my favourite authors with Tolkien and CS Lewis. And making them wizards... genius! Also curious to know if any of this is inspired by the movie of 'Lovely Bones' as my imaginations of the cornfield etc and abrupt scene changes are very much deriving from there. Keep up the excellent work and update soon!
Gamebird chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
I love it! I love that you've stripped them of their wands, making them solve their problems (or not) with their wits. I love that you've concocted a setting where you can reasonably, logically, have them face down nightmare after nightmare. It's great stuff, a wonderful vehicle for your intense, emotionally charged dramas!

Keep it up!
Catching A Common Cold chapter 2 . 12/8/2010
Amazing :)
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