Reviews for The Invitational Year
IcarusWing chapter 41 . 9/20/2013
AHH THIS WAS AMAZING I'LL KEEP THIS REVIEW SHORT SO I CAN GO READ THE SEQUAL. Okey, the only constructive critisism I have is that Russia and Spain were kinda out of character so now it's on to the sequal kthxbi.
hoLLic149 chapter 35 . 9/6/2013
Usually I don't review completed stories until I get to the end of it, but I am now because seriously I loved this chapter so freakin much. You had me laughing and smiling like an idiot through the whole thing. Absolutely AMAZING, really. XD
Looking forward to what's gonna happen next, and expecting some more good laughs (because seriously, Lovino is hilarious wherever you put him). Now back to my reading! :D
La Chattonne Noire chapter 41 . 9/4/2013
Wow! I don't know what to say! This fic is so awesome I just couldn't stop reading it once I'd started (A whole day and night of your awesome fanfiction!). It's got such a good plot and I love how it's long-running - it's really hard to find quality fanfiction that has an open plot to keep continuing. I really love how you made the characters your own while still keeping to some cannons, it worked really well as it made them refreshing but not out of character . I'm really happy that there's a sequal and I can't wait to go and read it, though I'll be dying with anticipation for each update as almost every chapter ending just made me want to read more! Sorry, I'm going on a bit but I just really wanted to get across how much I love this fanfiction! I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stories as well! :)
Olivia.Guess chapter 28 . 8/31/2013
i have a question.. is arthur's unicorn like the one from dispicable me?
Olivia.Guess chapter 26 . 8/30/2013
oh my god! I love that asian drama.. its cute and i cant believe that you made them watch it all in one night! awesome job though. one of my favorites so far too :)
codywrites chapter 41 . 8/28/2013
Dear sweet Jesus, that was the longest USUK fanfiction I ever read ;-;
All definitely worth it though, because I'm going to tell you now, this was one of THE best fanfics regarding Hetalia I've ever read. Considering Hetalia is the only thing I'm interested in, but... XD
I don't normally review stuff cos I either sound pathetic or bitchy or end up rambling, which is exactly what I'm doing now :D
My point is, you definitely deserve all the viewsfavesfollows for this, because despite all the 'errors' you claim to have, it's absolutely perfect. :)
However, I will say for the record that I think you portrayed Ivan as a little bit too vulgar. I'm aware he's more, eh... Obscene and violent and what-not, but I don't think he'd have a potty mouth :I He just strikes me as mostly quiet and innocent. Except when he's being a troublemaker obviously.
I do think you simply nailed Alfred and Arthur though :D
I lost count of the times I was screaming at Alfie for being so dumb XD
I also hate his parents. I wanted to slap Helen so many times it hurt!
But all in all, despite my awful review, this was totally worth reading until the early hours and I'm definitely following you and checking out your other stuff :D
Now excuse me, but I've got double vision from staring at the screen too long x_x
Much love 3
Olivia.Guess chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
Queertet? thats genius! btw great job so far! i love it.
wolfeclipse25 chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
I love it how Yao (kinda) suppirts Arthur's use of violence.
Mirimo27 chapter 39 . 8/4/2013
This was an amazing story from the beginning to the end, and I cannot begin to say how many positive comments I want to make about all your 39 wonderful chaps. The character developments happening here worked out extremely nicely, and the pacing of the story didn't ever feel rushed. You made me learn a lot of meaningful things in general just by reading this story, and I cannot thank you ever enough for writing such an excellent prestigious universe about Alfred and Arthur along with the rest of the allied group tagged along in it as a beautiful bonus. From the very moment I started reading this, this story had always sent me in a kind of hype where I couldn't stop reading what would happen next. There were many times I had to fangirl about certain moments (such as new characters coming in right after another into your story plot) and a ton of embarrassing scenes with Alfred where I couldn't stop laughing at as well. XD I'm utterly amazed you had such the time and patience to complete this work - I greatly admire your time, effort, and patience to this remarkable story. It really paid off! This is definitely one of the best USUK AU stories I've read. x] Now that I've finished off your well-deserved review, I will check the sequel as I really can't wait to start onto it next. :D
Stephers5000 chapter 39 . 7/31/2013
This is and probably will forever be the best America/England (Alfred/Arthur) fanfiction I have ever read. Honestly, I can't even explain how much it made me want to cry, laugh, and throw my computer out the window. I'm so excited to read the sequel! A friend of mine suggested this fanfiction to me, and at first I was hesitant because while America And England are a seriously cute fucking couple, I didn't ship them as much as i do now, AFTER reading your story. Keep writing, because your stories are amazing.
Wolfie Red chapter 41 . 7/28/2013
There are no words.

OK, That's a lie. There are many words or else this review would be non-existent.

This story is just amazing to me. You made me cry (from happiness, sadness, and anger), you made me facepalm (because at times I felt so embarrassed for the boys), you made me laugh and smile and giggle and everything an excellent story should do. The plot twists were shocking, the characters were hilarious, and just all around this is a great story. I was going to review chapter by chapter but I was too excited about reading the nest chapter to slow down and do so. You are an absolutely amazing writer. You are so funny and know just how to write something to get a reaction. The dedication it takes to write something this epic, so that it's not only long but that every word was worth it, is something that I truly admire. The whole name switch thing I caught a few times and I could figure it out, so whatevers. It is so hard after writing for a while to make it perfectly written because when you think it, there are no typos and I understand that. Along those lines, for any future stories if you ever need a beta, or want to talk because you're bored and I'm usually on the computer ( XD ) Please, feel free to PM me! I just can't wait till something you've done is published. We all need practice in some things but you are an amazing writer anyway. Thank you so much for writing this is was a great experience to read!

Love, EarlyWriter
Guest chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
Oh you sure know know to tug at these heartstrings of mine orz
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Oh Alfred... oh Alfred... the feels which I feel for him...
Brimerican chapter 30 . 7/25/2013
yoloswagmaster chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Poor Alfred ):
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