Reviews for Back to the West: The Corps of Rediscovery
Guest chapter 12 . 8/9/2020
Guest chapter 11 . 8/9/2020
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2020
PartyPat22 chapter 24 . 7/2/2017
Your dialogue doesn't convey a sense of professionalism at all, as it should in the case of lifelong members of the BoS. I enjoyed the med-x induced rambling quite a bit, though. The humongous scorpion scene was quite memorable and rather original. The "New Mossad" fellow's presence, and risking his life as well as a war with an army of power armored soldiers, didn't add up to me. I don't understand why you woukd spell Donovan the way you do either. Overall, it's decent. The dialogue as I mentioned before, is rather unbelievable.
AnthonyR89 chapter 39 . 3/14/2016
entertaining read overall, though i think you made the wanderer a bit of a wimp.
AnthonyR89 chapter 36 . 3/14/2016
still an interesting read. one thing though you said that the distance between DC and New Cannan was around a thousand miles. New Cannan's in Utah. making a whole hell of a lot closer to two thousand miles away. from CA to NY is three thousand miles, to give you some perspective.
AnthonyR89 chapter 28 . 3/14/2016
noticed a continuity error in this chapter. previously, the mr handy was named ronnie. now all of a sudden it's named reggie.
AnthonyR89 chapter 26 . 3/14/2016
funny that stuck with the name "med-x" when you deicded to use the names of real-world analogs when it comes to the weapons. you realize that med-x is morphine, right? they had to change the name to get past the censors. in germany or australia, iirc. just like they removed the fatman and the nuke in megaton for the japanese version of the game. for obvious reasons.
AnthonyR89 chapter 23 . 3/14/2016
...seriously, why are you having your lone wanderer going all emo?
AnthonyR89 chapter 22 . 3/14/2016
so, i'm going to go ahead and assume the mention of New Vegas in this chapter is a typo.
AnthonyR89 chapter 16 . 3/14/2016
still an entertaining read, though i think your Lone wanderer is a little naive. someone who's gone through everything that he has should be a bit more hardened.
AnthonyR89 chapter 13 . 3/14/2016
really not getting the lone wanderer's point of view here. he was completely justified in his actions. also kind of surprised he isn't more of a badass, considering this is set after the game.
AnthonyR89 chapter 6 . 3/14/2016
interesting story. pretty damn far east for the crimson caravan to be around though.
Guest chapter 28 . 7/25/2015
Really enjoyed the little reference to Ulysses that Ishmael made in chapter 28.
dreema chapter 39 . 7/19/2015
Nice story, thanks :)
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