Azucar chapter 32 . 10/12/2014
Something new Ive never read and although the subject matter was new the writing was really well done.

Ghostwriter chapter 32 . 8/17/2014
Awesome. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
barbaratakuyaho chapter 19 . 6/10/2014
The only sequel I want about Tony's dad is to hear some one shot, chopped. beat, ripped, boiled, eviscerated, poisoned, electrified, ran over,( car, train, tank, bus, semi), drowned, Avada Kadavera, with a wand, blown up, thrown off a building or bridge, dragged by a horse attacked by pit bulls or any other vicious critter, snake bit, starved, or tied to a chair to be forced to watch televised local government programs on a loop. That man is SCUM.
barbaratakuyaho chapter 8 . 6/10/2014
You just gave proof that we do not sell sex slaves. The deficit is soooo high.
barbaratakuyaho chapter 6 . 6/10/2014
I Meant to do this earlier. I have been thinking about reading this for awhile but never could. I read the first chapter to see what was going on. You have a good plot and great writing skills. Sadly I believe how Tony got into this mess happens. I am not sure how they are punished . Good does not always win, some times the only winning is when they get to GOD.
Rjones308 chapter 32 . 6/3/2014
I must admit that at times this was hard to read. I always try to push myself to read outside my comfort zone to experience new things. This was one. The story was well written and kept my interest. I must say I really enjoyed the ending. On to the sequel!
lily anson chapter 31 . 4/22/2014
oh dear lord! I started reading this last night and stayed up all night to finish it because I couldn't stop reading it! Love love love!
Scat210 chapter 32 . 1/22/2014
Just read the entire story, very good, some definite sexual tension between our two heroes, even if they fought it all the way.
Guest chapter 32 . 1/7/2014
I really liked this story which surprised me. You write a mean Gibbs! I glad you worte this! Hope everything is doing okay for you and your family! Can't wait to read the squeal! Loved this story! :D
Ahavia Lavana chapter 32 . 12/29/2013
I just re-read Forced Training because it was mentioned in LJ. Thank you for writing it. I love the ending and the struggle to get to that point.
Bedkar chapter 13 . 10/27/2013
This is where I came in at, I searched for Ball stretching, and here I was in the middle of this story. I had to go back and read from the beginning. I am a woman and find this very arousing, sorry I took so long to leave a comment. Great story, and it is compelling me to read on,,, TY for this story, you are a great writer, makes me want to know more about you.
jenny chapter 32 . 8/3/2013
great ending story is great too
farmgirl1964 chapter 32 . 4/13/2013
This story was unbelievable! Loved it, loved it, loved it! I would've commented after every chapter, but I just found it yesterday and couldn't be bothered to stop. Awesome job on everything ... characters were right - on, details beautifully done, storyline just too good to pass up! WOW

I will now be going back to read everything you've ever written. Thanks SO much!
stranger-ties chapter 32 . 3/24/2013
WOW! Amazing story, normally I don't read slave AU's but this one compleatly changed my mind, was hooked from chapter 1. Can't wait to read the sequel x
olliebella chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
read all , its great x
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