|Reviews for Provocation|
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/30
I want to read this cause it sounds great and LOOK AT ALL THOSE REVIEWS IT MUST BE GREAT! However it's not done and hasn't been updated in a long time! I don't wanna start reading this and love it to know it may not get an update ever again, so here I stand KICKING YOUR BUM INTO GEAR hopefully...
kick kick kick ok finish this or update so I can have faith and read it.
| Mello-drame chapter 28 . 11/30/2013
That was great ! It's such a shame you didn't finish it...
| LolaLaTrailera chapter 28 . 11/22/2013
Oh my God please update this T.T
I used to loved it! /3
| doggoneit chapter 28 . 10/16/2013
This story is so cute it makes me flail! I know it's been a while since you updated, but I hope you'll continue this fic- it's too good not to be finished! :)
| Saranki Mahira chapter 28 . 10/14/2013
| Kinkycurls chapter 28 . 10/8/2013
I really really love this story! It's exotic and erotic :3 I loved how Sasori fell so hard for Deidara and how Deidara broke his heart again and again. Sasori was so strong to keep trying and continuously loving Deidara instead of liking someone else like his playboy personality would do.
Sasori was extremely sweet yet he wasn't out of character. I still can't believe Sasori was uke though haha. Couldn't really tell until the Christmas party :P Deidara's so dominant hahahaha.
I really like the way this story was told and the constant fights make it seem realistic. It's a really great story and I'm kind of sad that you stopped updating this about a year ago. If you could, I'd really like if you'd finish this story :)
However, done or not, it's still one if the best stories I've ever read 3 thank you.
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/1/2013
update, please :3
| katerys chapter 27 . 9/30/2013
Hey, I remember reading this years ago. ) I really wish you would have finished it... /3
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/18/2013
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSS SEEEEEE
| write now chapter 28 . 8/14/2013
Whoa dude... that was a little awkward. ?... but uh... I LOVE yur work! Please coumtiue! I mean I love it so much and you need to finish this and I love! Please I need more! I will die if I cant read more! Please
| Plot-not-in-my-fanfiction chapter 28 . 5/20/2013
OMG this is so amazing, i love this story!
Please continue this sometime soon!
Im sorry that this is sorta late and all but i couldn't wait to do this as i was sorta afraid and all..
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/17/2013
This story made me develop a new-found love for cherry lollipops3
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/24/2013
omg this fic is so funny adn well built up! I have been laughing and reading all the chapters for about 2 hours now1 please update soon and gt pain a girlfriend! lol
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/11/2013
So, am I gonna kick your ass for the next update?
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/9/2013
PEIN IS GONNA CHECK THOSE TWO OUT!