Reviews for The Gift
Miko Eiko chapter 1 . 2/4
buaa he leido y escuchado la historia original pero esto es muy cruel buaaa
Teranovia chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Awwww! I'm crying!
tmntfan4ever chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Kilala58 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Wow this is some deep stuff. You had me crying when Leo didn't appear at the party.
Pistachio lover chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
This is freaking amazing! Great work! Had me tearing up at the letter to Mikey...that's deep stuff dude. Great story.
Vickyaisha chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
th is so beautiful i still cry ever time i read as i feel the sAme i would get my heart t my family n friends if the need it
i love readug the letter Leo write For mikey
thank u
ItShallBeSo no time to login chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Aw! That's so sad! It reminds me of a story where a girl is taken into hospital and needs a heart transplant and her boyfriend writes her a note saying 'i would die for you… I love you… tale good care of my heart'. Was that, by any chance, an inspiration?

Also the end of it made me think of of Mikey asking Leo what he's gonna get him when he's 16 (as you wrote) then Leo replying 'My heart.'

Good job!
ImmatureChild chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Oh my God! You actually got me to cry! I'm not kidding, and it wasn't a little crying either, it was full on silent tear mode. So sad, so good but so sad. T.T
Animegirl9894 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
That was really sad u should write a sequel about how it is after Leo died. Like Mikeys wants to prove himself to his big bro so he trains and stuff great story!
Yami Horus Drako Angelus chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
so sad so sad! and yet.. so beautiful! TvT
SavvyEnigma chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
That's so saaaaaad!
Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
This is so sad and happy at the same time almost made me cry.
Peechy-Keen chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
...So sad... Leo, you stupid, righteous, stubborn... Oh! I can't stand it! *bursts into tears* Why, Leo? Why? It's just not fair. (

I liked it. Very bittersweet. Grammar could be better, but this isn't your native language, is it? I get the feeling it's not, and if so, you write very well for it being a second language D

I like how your writing style has improved so much with time ) Very nice.

God Bless,

BlowMyHeartUp chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Oh my gosh :(

That was so sad and so beautiful all at the same time!

When Mikey couldn't find Leo at the party I actually felt sick because I realised what Leo had done :(

The ending made me cry when Mikey could feel Leo as the wind

Beautiful story!
shellbell33 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
*Sobbing* oh that was very sad. So very very sad...Poor Mikey and Poor Leo...*sniffles*

That was very good read. And so very sad. Leo giving his all for his little brother..Just like Leo would.

Awe *hugs Mikey* Its so very depressing lol. but very good.
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