Poor Spirits especially Loke, seeing your master die so many times already.

It hurt to read even one of them... But number 17 for me was the saddest.

T.T It hurts to read this.. so sad.. gah.. T_T

Great job~

Soooo sad. T_T

I like the style of writing you used here. They really are a tragic couple, but I can still hope the best for them.

*sniffle* That last line there...it got me...it sounded so deep and it was as if you could feel Loke's pain... I think I'm about to cry. Just from how awesome that last line was.

You are freakin epic... TT Ah man...Loke...

Nothing lasts forever but nothing really end as well - your story reminds me of this phrase... The last part was so sad but still cute... congratulations and well done! gambattekudasai! fighting!

Sabrina-chan xoxo

so sad but brilliantly written

That was so... sad yet so beautiful. I can see it happening in the manga. I'm still rooting for Loki though. They're just too cute together!

It's cute TT_TT poor Loki

oh, heartbreaking.. :(

This is simply beautiful . Extremely touching ,breathtakingly beautiful . But it does raise an interesting thought : given his immortality , it is a real possibility that he may find another that he might love on a level approaching that for Lucy, somewhere in endless time.

THAT WAS VERY UPSETTING. BUT THAT'S HOW I LIKE MY FIC.

All nostalgic and bittersweet and tragic~! awesome! to communicate such strong emotion in so short a time frame/word count is a great skill :D