|Reviews for More Lovely and More Temperate|
| Naya chapter 1 . 3/3
That. Was. Perfect. The built up and the teasing and the characterisation, it all was so spot on that it felt like I was watching the show (though with a rather, uh, different rating of course).
I loved the smut because it was hot and heartfelt but not to the point of being cheesy. Actually, it felt incredibly natural, the way it was so desperate and a little bit awkward. Just like them, perfect.
I really loved this and I can't wait to read more of your works. You're brilliant.
| Cypriana chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
What a fantastic story. I love it. You have written Arthur so well as a girl, he is still our beloved prattish Arthur 3 That's great. Oh and I really loved Merlin too.
| Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
That was... wow! I'm completely speechless... and I'm afraid the blush on my face will be permanent. XD
I want a continuation! This time, Arthur is cured, and will be doing the ravishing. LOL ;)
| GothicDebby chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
great fic! I thought Arthur as a girl, but still bitchy, was hilarious!
| Merlin lover chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Please write more of this story, it is truly fantastic!
| anon chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
| meljoy chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
i love it! i love the way u made Arthur remained Arthur! i really love it! will there be a chp 2? its awesome! i love how u made Merlin so strong an manly like 'I coiuld move the world" ilove those lines!
| HelloHugo chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I love this! I keep re reading it, it is just perfect! I would love to read it from Merlins POV now.
| MarshmallowSun chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
This... This is pure win.
I love you so much for this.. *dies from the awesomeness*
| Sammyy chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Hey there :D
okayy so I don't read fem!arthur/Merlin fictions... Until I read yours . I'm a TOTAAL faghag and I read this and LOLL ! anazimmggggggg *i swear im almost incoherant right noweieiwksbdhdowoeiqha.
Seriously. It was just so brilliant. I love how Arthur was aaactually Arthur rather than some princes lady that falls ib love with - what I'm trying to say is that I really really love your fiction 3
And although it wasn't hardcore smexy slash.. it was still epically hot and I read it twice over just now with my EPICface on :DDD
I think I love you
| remioromen1344 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I won't lie, normally I don't go for sex-change stories. But this. This. You. I have never seen this done so beautifully. You made the characters perfect and your writing style is amazing. 3 Great, great job.
| TidusGT chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
the story was awesome! make another story, Arthur returning to normal!
| Kat Nightfox chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
First, I want to start out by saying that I really LOVED this story, which rather surprised me because for some reason the initial idea didn't appeal. However, you completely won me over. I loved every bit of it except the bit I'm going to point out below. And honestly, the story was written well enough to overlook it. But...
I hate to nit-pick but I can't help myself as the history of women's clothing (and men's to a lesser extent) has been a hobby of mine for over 20 years. I may not be the first person to point this out to you but women didn't wear corsets or petticoats for the most part until (roughly) the Renaissance. I know the television show hasn't specified exactly when this is supposed to take place but traditionally, the Arthurian legend occurs in the Dark Ages or very early Medieval period. Though they are terribly inaccurate in their historical use of fabric & fashion/armor/building materials/weapons and well almost everything, even they haven't pulled in corsets & petticoats.
Still loved your story though ;-)
| Borednbrowsing chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Wow, that was very well written! :D Beautiful job.
| Budgie4 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Oh my gad! I absolutely loved this! I'm just so blown away right now that I don't rightly know what to write, but, wow! Arthur was - and Merlin - and just wow! I'm just going to swoon now, and then I'll come back to read it again. Simply spectacular.