|Reviews for My Precious Imouto|
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/4/2013
Go on pleaseee
| Russia is mine chapter 9 . 8/5/2013
NOOOO! THEY BETTER NOT TURN INTO HOLLOWS OR ELSE THE WORLD IS DOOMEEDD I TELL YA DDOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMDDDDDDDDDDD!
| Russia is mine chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
BWAHAHAHAHA! NOW! to plan their next move (was planning to be the leader of Akatsuki... THAT'S ME! :D)
| Mizaki otonashi chapter 9 . 7/31/2013
go on pleaseeee ;)
| Gonzanime chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Honestly I love, is a great and very funny story lol XD Super anxious hope the next chapter! :D
| Every shadow chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
Awww! I hope you update soon that was a great chapter. I hope Karin tells them what was and what will happen if they don't get help. Poor Itachi! Great job!
[Every shadow has its twin]
| Wheelchairmaniac99 chapter 9 . 2/16/2013
This is an awesome story, i would very much like to read more! please update soon!
| Iker18 chapter 9 . 2/3/2013
Espero y actualices pronto, esta genial el fic n.n
| sendicard chapter 9 . 1/24/2013
Haha, Itachi beat the shit out of his inner world. Tsukiyomi went from three days to a few weeks now? Itachi has gotten powerful, huh...
The group is starting their turn into Hollows. Wonder how long they have in total time before they turn. They are going to need to find a Shinigami to Konso them before it happens or else they will be putting Karin in danger... I wonder which of the group will go to hell, if any. Even if it seems otherwise, I kind of think that Itachi's intentions kind of out do the actions. I mean, it was all for the good of his village, in that respect he isn't much different from a Soldier. Eh, I guess that all kind of comes down to your own beliefs huh?
As for the other members... I don't really know...
| sendicard chapter 8 . 1/24/2013
The interactions at camp seem to be slow, as normal. It wasn't nearly as amusing because the drop in intelligence was obvious. If you had made it seem a little more mocking and less stupid, I might have actually chuckled.
A name for the Hollow? Well you could follow canon's route and not give him a name. He actually says in canon, "I don't have a name!" before trying to kill Byakuya.
| sendicard chapter 7 . 1/24/2013
A really short chapter where Ichigo actually thinks for once. Don't really have much to say, except maybe "finally!"
| sendicard chapter 6 . 1/24/2013
Very fine battle. Wouldn't it have been easier for Itachi to just kill Ichigo? Whatever, I'm sure you have your reasons.
Ouch, Karin is evil. That, that is so mean...
| sendicard chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Hmm, this was most interesting. an entire chapter of set up, after a chapter of set up; it still didn't feel like too much. Can't tell whether that is because it was nessecary, or because you are just that good. Could also be because I haven't been reading much fanfiction as of late and have gotten stale.. Ya, most likely that.
I feel that Ichigo is just a bit more trigger happy than he would be in Canon, although that can easily be explained.
| sendicard chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Judging by the beginning, I am guessing Sasori turned back into a human body when he died?
Well this chapter was mainly set up for the battle, very well done set up but still set up.
The Bleach characters who participate in this story seem to have been changed in personality to fit a Naruto type story more. Shells of their former, filled with Naruto type characters. Kind of interesting actually, I get the feeling you like Naruto more than Bleach.
| sendicard chapter 3 . 1/24/2013
"How do you-." He was going to say 'how did you come to that conclusion' but she instantly cut him off, thinking he was going to say 'how did you know'."
No.. I'm pretty sure she was thinking he was going to say "how do you know," not "how did you know."
At least with the original wording anyway.
Anyway, liking the story. Still not very much to comment on, really kind of straight forward.