Reviews for The Killer Inside Me
SteelLark chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
The writing is very dry. There is no emotion and it's boring. You can't even like or relate to the character. It was way to ambitious to try and make this a one shot and you failed on making it work. It's not possible to put all the plot points you did into a one shot story. It could have been good but your execution was lacking.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Great story. You should right another and post it.
Shadowolf315 chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
this is really good
3 3 3 3 3 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Wow I love this :)