|Reviews for Letters|
| richard.l.whereat chapter 19 . 4/18
Okay, less of a bastard than I originally thought.
| richard.l.whereat chapter 18 . 4/18
An utter, utter, bastard. I do not believe in hell, and yet I hope a hell suddenly exists so you can burn in it.
| JittottiJ chapter 21 . 4/18
That a nice story! I think I would have prefered to cannon were it not the kind of lame (in my opinion) way Voldemort is dealt with.
With that out of the way, you had the most entertaining AND original Triwizard Tournament I've ever read. And the penpal thing was both genius and a never seen before for me.
The romance and the quidditch were the most entertaining and well written parts of the story, I don't think I've ever seen it elsewhere, goog job!
Also, it's irrelevant to the story but in France, Lotus is both a car brand and a toilet paper/tissue brand. Just though you ought to know, especially when Harry says things like: "Lotus is the answer to my problems! For a perfect tool, choose Lotus!".
Anyway, I hope you write more (thought I've yet to check on your other stories) and wish you good luck in whatever you're doing (just trying to end this...)!
| BeFlat chapter 21 . 4/14
I really enjoyed your whole take on the tournament and the small things you changed which made for a completely different story. And I have to say I even enjoyed the alternate epilogue as it was so convincing, even though throughout the story I was definitely pulling for Harry and Fleur.
| DragonLark chapter 9 . 3/25
Is it just me, or does Krum seem like North, from "Rise of the Guardians" in this chapter?
| Lord of Stories chapter 21 . 3/15
Quite amazing. A lot of writers attempt this pairing and botch it- not you. You're also one of the best, if not the best, Quidditch writers on this website as well.
I felt like both epilogues were very well-written and enjoyable, but slightly out of place. Daphne always felt like a sideshow throughout this whole story. I admire how you were able to pair the two at the end, but it was very odd juxtaposing Daphne into a Harry/Fleur story. At the same time, Fleur's epilogue, while making sense, felt more underdeveloped then Daphne's- ironic considering how Fleur was Harry's main love interest. I know this review probably doesn't matter, considering how this fic was completed ages ago, but it's just something that I felt and wished to point out.
Nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed this story- you should write more about Harry and Fleur and Quidditch. After all, you're the only one here who can do it any justice. :)
| thepkrmgc chapter 21 . 3/12
im honestly not sure which of the epilouges i like better, they are both great
| thepkrmgc chapter 20 . 3/12
nice twist, happy ending doesnt necessarily mean happy ever after
| thepkrmgc chapter 19 . 3/12
nice job on the graveyard and meeting with james and lily: epilouge isnt bad but im looking forward to the extended versions
| thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 3/12
nice job on the maze, heres hoping that both of our hero's survive voldy
| thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 3/12
nice job using the quidditch for great character development: the loss does work better for that kind of thing
| thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 3/12
i expected a bigger scandal after rita's article, but youve passed up plenty of chances to get harry ostracised before so i shouldnt be surprised
| thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 3/12
your authors note makes me curious what a crossover between minesweeper and grand turismo would be like...
| thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 3/11
my earlyer concerns about how the fleuromance have been resolved: though your daphne is also an awesome character and i hope youve made another fic where she takes the lead
| thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 3/11
im surprised that daphne wasnt harry's hostage, and harry's timing feels wrong, but thats more of a personal dislike of the "hero's reward" type of romance then anything against your writing