I cried thinking this was real and Fleur abandoned him you should put the alternate universe at the end not first stupid mf I cried and was in shock and then my whole week was ruined

I like this Daphne Greengrass, you portray her well.

Dump Ron's ass, for Merlin's sake. Alright, maybe just letting him believe he's a friend while not caring about him is good too, but I don't exactly see the point. And any progress on investigations who put Harry into TWT? Why is everyone so fucking passive, come on.

Letters are surprisingly wholesome and I like that the school has more stuff lined up than just 3 tasks with nothing in between for months as in canon. And yeah, not cancelling quidditch completely makes a lot of sense, better than the canon for sure.

My biggest gripe would be the part where the professors get the copies of all letters. This is such a breach of privacy and everyone just rolls with it? Bullshit

One slight correction - Roger Davis says he sorry he won't be able to take part in the quiditch next year, however, in the Goblet of Fire, Roger Davis is in fact a sixth year, as shown by him being present during Order of the Phoenix during Harry's date with Cho.

I really enjoyed this tale. I have to say your quidditch writing is the best I have come across as well.

Just a small critcism here. You had Fleur sign her letter adieu. BAD! Yes it "can " be translated as good bye but to a French speaking person this means a permanent good bye. Adieu is actually a religious good bye meaning Go with God and you say this onlt if you expect to never see the person again. Au revoir is much better as its real meaning is 'till I see you gain or in this case 'till you write again since that is the contact thatthey have.

I should have expected it but I’m honestly disappointed it’s not Harry x fleur. You had made the perfect set up for it and everything.

God I hate conjugation. The bane of me not learning other languages XD

#2 by a mile! Daphne!

I can't continue on this harry is just so fucking retarded that it's difficult to read. God he's dumb as a rock

urgh harry is such a fucking moron his mommy is probably disappointed as fuck

Harry has such a whiny, jealous and borderline arrogant personality. He has so, so many bad thing about him that I just cannot see a smart girl like Fleur dating him. The only good part of him is his loyalty, magic power and luck. Otherwise he's far below average.

I'm sorry...Lilian Seslion...is this like a hurriedly covered up Black Clover reference? Lol!