I absolutely love your use of banter between these two! Rapunzel's embarrassed innocence in the first chapter juxtaposed with her more casual, flirtatious attitude in the second works beautifully, because in BOTH chapters, she is passionate, curious, eager, and so desperately in love. And same goes for Eugene: still somewhat in his "Flynn Rider" persona in the first chapter, while also knowing how very, very innocent Rapunzel was at that time, and completely embracing his true self in the second chapter, madly and utterly in love with one woman, one princess who changed his life forever. I love how this entire fic is just so playfully romantic, funny and adorable, and steamy all at once! Lovely fic, thank you for sharing this!

Wow I love the describing, you had a lot of good details and it felt like this was taken straight from the movie because it really felt like the real characters. You’re an amazing author!

Sooooo steamy yaaaaas

Perfect ending and awesome climax

Freaking yes oml

This was cute and amusing. Nice job stopping it there.

Gorgeous story! Love that kinda of smut!

Too cute

Really beautiful!

Chapter 1, hilarious. I loved it. Ch2 tastefully done. Good job.

Damn that was a hot ass story but you need to put more sex in it like a blowjob full on sex creampies possions etc.. idk but it was hot and i liked it but you need to put more PORN in it lol

That was beautiful! I would love to read more. That's the perfect fairy tale and now it needs a perfect fairy tale ending!

Good, but a little slow. Other than that, much better than some of the other fanfic's I've read. It's nice to see someone who takes grammar seriously. Kudos to you.

a bit of daww, but also boner.

*nudge nudge*