|Reviews for Vintage|
| Fleija chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
"Scientific procrastination is artistic inspiration"
I'm going to say that to the next person I meet. By the way, I like the story! An excellent portrayal of the setting, a hectic party going on in the background.
| Nettlebane chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Sakuya tryin' to be all suave at the end, putting the moves on Remi.
I see what you did there.
Great story, I loved the interaction between Sakuya and Murasa. It was interesting to see the relationship between the two develop XD
| RioPride chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
"No fair, Murasa, monopolizing all of sister's time!"
"Goddamn, Ichirin, can you try and not co-"
"My name is Hong Meiling!"
"-block me all the time? Shit, you're so goddamn clingy! What're you, a goddamn little kid? You've got Unzan! Go ask for huggies from Unzan. Go on, go. Dismissed."
I raise my glass to you and Murasa.
| Selryam chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
I like your style. Normally I wouldn't think many lines of dialogue with minimal regular text would be a good idea, at least not for anything other than a short segment. Yet you pull it off spectacularly in this. I especially enjoyed the way you use other characters' outbursts to help establish the chaotic setting and censor Murasa or punctuate Sakuya's silence. Yes, it reads very smoothly and clearly, even without dialogue tags. I admire you for this.
In addition, the characterization is spot-on, I feel. Sakuya's elegant and perfect maid persona, in particular. Can't say I know much about Murasa other than something like "CAPTAIN MINAMITSU MOTHERFUCKING MURASA, BITCH", but your portrayal here is how I will forever view her, because it's so great. Loved all of it.
If it makes you feel any better, I'm procrastinating my college applications for this.
| TelephonePollster chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
That was awesome. Such a random pair of people to strike up a conversation. Also, I enjoyed your censors. They were very funny.
This is one of my favorites, from what you've written. Not sure what's changed, but it's great.
| Anonymous Pyramid Head chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
That was a very nicely written story...
Oh how I love crack-pairings in the Touhou fandom...
From Rumia x Meirin to Yukari x Alice and even to Suika x Mystia...
Gensokyo is a glorious yuri paradise (and the occasional futa)
That said, fairy piss DOES sparkle...
I've seen a few pictures of Cirno and Daiyousei urinating and I saw SPARKLES
Haha, you can find them at Pixiv provided you know the Japanese tag for urine as well as Cirno/Dai's Japanese names on the tag system...
Oh, and you have to register much like Deviantart
Lastly, will this be continued..? I would love to see the budding relationship between Murasa and PADyo