Reviews for Juice Not JC
Guest chapter 25 . 11/13/2012
Honestly it may be a good thing seeing how many different versions you have been writing here of late. That being said though i really hope you finish the regular story of juice and milla, at least through the end of season four. Seeing juice come back around to his old self would be fantastic! It's just wrong to your readers to leave it unfinished. Sorry but I hate that. Blame stephanie Meyer for not finishing midnight sun lol...
Juice'sPeachy chapter 7 . 10/11/2012
i wasnt bad:) add more details though...readers love details3
Juice'sPeachy chapter 4 . 10/11/2012
how cute :)
Juice'sPeachy chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
nice chapter :) nice details. aww i wanna fall in love with someone like juice hehe
Juice'sPeachy chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
:D hes so adorable!
Wanna B. Lurker chapter 15 . 9/23/2011
I laighed when I read your A/N in this chapter. The end of Season 3 was a kinds of Juice. Constantly giving him lines and close- ups. And now the new season...? Woo. Loving this revisitation of the story. Especially the naughty bits.
Superdani4Ever chapter 24 . 6/29/2011
thank you for the new chapter!

It was amusing as hell watching porn being filmed all day, yet frustrating as shit that I couldn't do anything about it until later-LMAO!

I'd probably die from chronic blue ball-itis-riiiiiiight

I wished Milla could've finished her off-YEAH!

What Milla doesn't know won't hurt her-yeah,you keep thinkign like that

IMA?WTF?

The only other time it had been this bad was Indian Hills and that was my fault entirely-yep

Life was fucking great-lmao

LMAO!GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LYLA!I remember that

I'm Tina-ohhhhhhhh...I REMEMBER HER!DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!

He was also the only other monogamous Son that I knew about...YET *wink,wink*
Verda Napoli chapter 24 . 6/28/2011
Hey chick! For whatever reason, this wouldn't let me review at first.

I love all of the tie ins. Ie your AU characters and personas with scenes and lines straight from the show. It's done so seamlessly that I feel like i'm watching the show. My obsessive compulsive self gets so excited everytime I see the tie in from one of your one shots to this story. (ie the issues that Milla and Luann had before her death. Still breaking my heart.)

So glad that Milla fucked up Ima. Really, Ima got off easy on the show. In real life, all of the old ladies probably would have rat packed that bitch, fried her up as bacon, and served her for breakfast with eggs. I also love that Juice gave her a nice little blow to her ego. You go, Juicy!

I'm glad that you "unfluffed" with the Piney scene. He has a very realistic take on what's going on between Juice and Milla. he's able to seperate himself from the Milla and think about Juice his brother. Done in a very respect way though. Good job! I love how well Juice handles himself. (Ie the scene with Tina)

You know I love any scene that you insert Opie into. I like the little bridge between Opie and Juice as the only two monogamous Sons. Opie and Juice are really similar in a lot of ways-big hearts, loyal, terrible timing. I felt so bad for Opie all of S2 so this nice little moment with Juice was so necessary. Thank you much. I also felt so bad for Juice and carrying the weight of Donna on his shoulders. I like that even though he isn't nearly as responsible as Tig or Clay, he shoulders some of the blame. I can see Juice being noble that way.

Oh btw, expect a PM from me in the next few days. I have a proposition for you!
Verda Napoli chapter 23 . 6/8/2011
Aw I love S2 Milla and Juice:)

I love the fact that the club members are so supportive and complimentary of her, but it isn't overwhelming. It's very realistic of a bunch of crazy guys who watched their good friend's little girl grow up:)

Of course Jax makes everything about him. 'No one hurts MY sister and gets away with it.' The prince needs so much attention. You're getting good at writing him as bratty as he is:) Very subtle way to go about it. Kudos.

Ass kicking Juice? I dig it. Clay is beyond perfect. He isn't the type to freak out and whine and cry. He just handles his business and expects others to do so. I love that he trusts Juice so much with his little girl.

Onto my suggestions. How about a Luann one shot? Chibs is at the top of my list. How about her relationship with Papa Clay? As for Season 2, I'd like to see how Milla felt during her mother's rape confession. Or when Chibs got blown up. Can't wait for new stuff girl:)
LittleRedAllGrownUp chapter 23 . 6/8/2011
Ok this is going to sound a little wrong because I love Juice. He is without a doubt my favorite Son. But in the episode where their in jail and he's used as 'bait' I was cracking up the entire time. He was just so flustered (as I imagine any straight guy would've been) it was funny in a very wrong way. And way before I found your stories I was always wondering 'What the hell was going through his mind?'

Add the two deleted scenes from that ep. that are both Juice-centric one dealing with trying to 'pimp da bait' (lol never saying that again) and the other where ice-bitch come to the sick room to try to get him to rat on the 'war' between Jax and Clay.

Since I've starting reading this story in particular the whole getting stabbed incident has always popped up in my mind. Milla and the baby most defiantly had to be on the forefront of his mind.

Well there's my suggestion. Sorry It's so long!
Superdani4Ever chapter 23 . 6/8/2011
awww,I miss those 2 together!thank you for this chapter!

no way Milla wants you smoking with a baby in the house-awww,daddy!

I just hope you can keep up…Dad-YAY!

Why didn't you check your fucking phone-dumb!

We have to take care of that fat prick and his goons-HELL YEAH!

No one hurts my fucking sister and gets away with it-YOU GO JACKIE!

had a damn crush on her -RIP Kip

oh NOW the dude is scared?

YOU GO JUICE BOY!GOTTA PROTECT YOUR WOMAN!

Ima?riiiiiiiiiiiight!

Knowing you that's exactly what happened-I know,I know

She was about as trustworthy as an angry rattlesnake-THANK YOU FOR SEEING THAT!

Of course I'd probably have to work with Chantal but I could suck it up-lol.I forgot how funny it was thier little "feud"

She didn't take my Reaper or the look on my face into consideration-now THAT'S a Nurse Icy!

We put the fear of the cut in him-WOO HOO!

What I like more about your story is to see how Juice feels about MIlla from his POV,it's just PERFECT!He's so scared of loosing her that breaks my hearts ?Well it'd be fun to see the part when Juice and Chibs are at Lu's studio watching a was a funny scene.

One shots?well,I know it's not fair,but you know who my favorite is ;) And I'd love to see a father/daughter moment.

KEEP ROCKING!
Guest chapter 23 . 6/7/2011
I personally would love to see more one shots from the girls pov. Tara, Gemma, Lyla, Luanne, hell even ima-as much as I hate her! Maybe I would hate her less if you showed us inside her head. : ) Love your writing keep it up!
Superdani4Ever chapter 22 . 4/28/2011
Hi girl!Long time no see!

Thanks for the new chapter!

The guilt over everything was still eating away at me-ouch

"Who do you-"-YOU GO GIRL!

I'll always be with you baby-they're just sooooooooooo cute!

but the reaper on my back didn't mean what it used to-can't blame the girl

I was wondering if you'd take the Father of the Groom position in the wedding party?-family is family ;)

nothing like the good ol' HSM

the Disney monstrosity-LMAO!
Superdani4Ever chapter 21 . 4/8/2011
thanks for the new chapter!

it's really hard to imaging Juice's did a great job

I miss the cute couple!

tramp stamp territory-LMAO!never heard that before

"This'll fucking kill her."-of course it will

You gotta contain that shit-thought job Juice.

Watch that tone boy-lol,ohhhhhhh

if I wanted her sane I had to hurt her-I guess that's what they call though love

She was always going to be the sexiest woman in the world to me, even when she was bat shit crazy-awwwwww,romantic!

did you get my e-mail?
Yammy1983 chapter 20 . 2/17/2011
great update!
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