|Reviews for Dark Dreams of Jenova|
| draco'sfairmaiden chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Hey, here I am reviewing another one of your fics! Can I just say that I am addicted to your fics? I think you're the reason I got into this fandom in the first place.
Poor Cloud. He certainly doesn't deserve the hand he was dealt with. I love how even when he's tormented by Jenova, he thinks of Zack first. That's why their relationship is so beautiful to me-they're both willing to die for the other. Another thing that was sweet was the way Cloud called for Zack when he woke up.
| Asdfgh12345 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Hey, this was a pretty interesting read for me. Thanks.
| LastOrder1 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Really good story here;) I really like the close bond that Zack and Cloud have. I remember just a few years back when I first became a fan of Final Fantasy 7. They were the first characters that I saw from the series. So basically Zack and Cloud and their close friendship is actually what drew me into the whole FF7 Compilation...Now, I'm such an FF7 junkie, haha:) I see Zack and Cloud's bond a lot like a big brother/little brother and father/son type bond. I really like their friendship. Well anyways, great story. I noticed that it's from your other story minus Lilleas, but it's still really awesome;)
| Emriel chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
want to know what happens next
| OnexLostxSoul chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
A very powerful, chilling piece.
It's not often one sees Jenova take on the form of an interacting character, and the way you portray her in Cloud's vision is extraordinary. Attempting to manipulate Cloud by taunting him and isolating him were truly intriguing details. You characterize Jenova, shaping her drive to control Cloud. The reader can really feel Cloud's mental anguish and come to understand the effect the experimentation has had on him. The 'deal' made between Cloud and his vision of Jenova has tragic implications, and it was an extremely clever way to tie it together.
Well done, Chibi! ;D Good representation of a psychological struggle.
| Nephilim Rising chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Oooh, you published it separately! Thank you. Now I read it all over again and... love Cloud torture. I love how Jenova shape-shifts and plays with him. The only question - as I told you earlier - are her motivation. Of course, I don't know how it was connected to your story, but from this oneshot it's impossible to tell why Jenova needs Cloud to obey.
Zack's devotion to Cloud also made an interesting read, for I don't get to read many of those.
I liked the description of the morning at the beginning - quite a vivid picture of the fog and silence. But my favorite moment has to be when Jenova tells Cloud in a very descriptive manner that he could not save Tifa. (the frail hands clutching at the plank). It was a painful memory, but I sooo love it.
Anyways, before I go into vivid description, I'll wrap it up not to sound too sadistic. :D And good luck with your other story!
| mom calling chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Hey there, chibipinkbunny. You have really kept at your writing, haven't you...thank you for the note about this chapter. I did read it and the line that set off bells in my head was the "a good mother would have known." Used cleverly here. With Jenova's shapeshifting, it's a wonder they are able to believe anything all. What does it do to a person to never know if what seems real and alive and genuine may not be so. We learn to use our senses pretty early on, and if we loose the ability to trust that what we perceive is real, the devestation must be harsh, total. thx for this and good luck on your remaining classes. On the countdown, huh? mc
| midnight13731 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
I loved reading this again! It was such an intense scene!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
when is the next chapter coming?
| Bono T chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
wow, talk about twists and turns suspense and...well awesomness really good language and sentence structure. I'm actually feeling quite jealous here. good luck in your writing future!