|Reviews for Kill or be killed: The 202nd Hunger Games|
| ElementalEvolution chapter 55 . 2/28
A lot of it! But pleaseeeeeee, I need to know - what happened to Rayann? She didn't overdose, did she. Was she murdered?
Good story, will read next one soon XD
| ElementalEvolution chapter 54 . 2/28
Noooo! What happened to poor Rayann? I kinda expected Rayann to win, and you portrayed her pain over Lyla and Bethuny perfectly. Even now, I guess I do feel a little bit sorry for Maximotus - he was a victim as much as the rest of them were.
| ElementalEvolution chapter 53 . 2/28
Tarren and Ally did the pal thing where they fanned out their hands. I've actually seen this before; in a book called "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time", so I totally get the reference!
Elise! Just Elise! She is so...interesting and creepy. Everyone is sure to get a surprise when she comes along and kills a few people!
| ElementalEvolution chapter 51 . 2/26
I wasn't surprised to see that Rayann and Maximotus were fighting it out. Poor Monk...She was a defiant one! The games were good in general, but I must say that you made many mistakes in your writing. Proofread! Spell check! It is the only way that your writing will be perfect. Your spelling was the only reason why I didn't favourite this story. The stories I favourite have to have a sharper control over their language and plot lines. Don't doubt it - the story was very good - but come on: Rayann suddenly gets a spear when it was sucked away by a sink-hole a couple of chapters back. And also, where did the glass come from?
I wonder who will win...
| ElementalEvolution chapter 34 . 2/24
Wait...what? Maximotus is 14? 14! No. Way. Poor Lyla. I'm going to miss her...
| ElementalEvolution chapter 29 . 2/24
It won't be too long before those bloodthirsty careers turn on eachother, and I reckon Maximotus is going to have to fight for his life when Tristan finds Katie and finds out the truth. Selena and Krindle would most likely side with them, and it would be a 4 vs 2 battle. I like it XD
Ironically, you said you edited this chapter, but there are still a few mistakes! If I finish reading this story, AND the next one fast enough, then I will consider joining your 204th Games, by submitting a few tributes. I don't know how many I'll be allowed to submit, but hey! I'll try. I'll vote on polls and I'll review, and that will give a 66% more chance of winning.
Bye for now.
| ElementalEvolution chapter 19 . 2/23
My Final Eight:
| ElementalEvolution chapter 14 . 2/23
I think that all of the pyramids history and stuff could be true. It would be interesting if it was. Good writing again! And yes, I got the reference to the sea monster. I am sure that it will be coming soon...
| ElementalEvolution chapter 13 . 2/23
At the most 5.
By the way, this was a much better chapter. Well Done XD
| ElementalEvolution chapter 12 . 2/23
Hmmm, I can't answer the second question, so I'll answer the first. I think dramatic Eygptian music would work well XD
| ElementalEvolution chapter 11 . 2/23
I have no idea how to do that line either, and I've been doing my best to find out about that in my SYOT!
Poor Kathleen definitely had the worst death. I would have saved Layana, because she's awesome, but it seems that she died. I kinda wanted her to go far...
You do have a growing number of mistakes. I have only one thing to say. Proofread.
Exciting arena though! I like the gold coins. I wonder what significance they could have...
| ElementalEvolution chapter 10 . 2/23
Jynx is an unfair little (insert swear word here) XD
Ahhh! Why are you making me get so attached to all of the characters! I'll stick by my 7 though, until all of them are dead of course. Yessssss the bloodbath. It is time for the tributes to fall.
| ElementalEvolution chapter 6 . 2/23
OK! 7 favourites now! Metszy Jango and Alec Seth. Hmmm. Training. What is going to happen here?
| ElementalEvolution chapter 5 . 2/23
Your writing has quite a few spelling mistakes, but other than that it is good. I'm going to say that I am rooting for 6 characters in the games, but I only have 5 that I like at the moment.
Layana is a cool tribute. Even though she's blind, I reckon she's got some fight in her. Sarah and Beth had a nice conversation and they look to be friends but will they survive. Selena and Krindle are pretty cool too, but can they kill to prove that they are worth getting in to the careers?
| ElementalEvolution chapter 3 . 2/23
So, I know this story is probably finished, but yeah I'll be reading it anyway.
Your writing is good, just watch out for sentence structure.
Bye for now, E.E.