LOVED THIS. Felt inclined to comment that your stories with Endymion and Serenity are absolutely amazing. I can see the growth from your very first story and each fic you’ve written gets progressively better. This one in particular has been utterly amazing. The love between Endymion/Serenity in this was so pure, tender, and encompassing. I genuinely was getting lost in their love. When he said that she had his whole heart I felt it!

Really enjoyed the story, you are a very talented writer. Looking forward to reading more of your stories!

This is my third fave of your stories! I've read it so many times. I love it and I love your writing and I am SO happy that you are writing still. You're stories bring me genuine joy

Even after the many years that you wrote this... it is soooo good! You have a gift for writing!

Bro. This was easily one of my favourite AU stories! So captivating and beautifully written. I truly hope you continue to write. You are so gifted. Endymion and Serenity make my heart absolutely melt!

YO THIS WAS AMAZING. Fire is one of my fave books! I really loved this so thank you!

I came across this story today and while I was reading it, I couldn't help but feel that it reminded me of a novel I had read before. I was trying to remember the name of the novel since I remembered really enjoying it and loving it, but the name escaped me. As I got further along with your fic though, I realized that THIS was the "novel"!

I am so, so, SO happy to have found this little treasure of a fic once again. It was a pleasure re-reading it and you can bet that it has easily found its way in my favourites list so I can return to it again in the future.

Thank you for writing this.

I really enjoyed reading this story. Good work with writing it.

This has got to be one of THE best AU stories i have read! I adore everything about it! Especially Serenity's power & the background of the fight between gods & humans. So wonderfully written! Chapter 22 just killed me. Serenity's power, Endymion reacting to her & trusting her & knowing her so well... The ending was also wonderfully done. How they treated the king. Great job all around! I wish i had your imagination & skill in writing.

This was a very good story! I feel like there is something we still don’t know about Endymion - aka why he’s the only one who couldn’t be controlled, but that’s ok. Thanks!

So good! Fantastic job!

Amazing story! It really felt as if I'm reading a very original YA book! It was surprising, unexpected and just kept me on the edge of my seat. Really wonderfully written and thought out! Thank you for creating this!

So I know you haven’t been active in a while, but I’ve just discovered your work and am blown away. I stayed up late last night reading this, and it is an amazing work. I love the relationship you’ve created between Serenity and Endymion—it’s perfect that she wouldn’t be able to read his emotion (so so in character for him). I love how you explore Serenity’s relationship with her own powers, and how complicated that can be. And honestly, most of all, I absolutely loved the ending scenes with Serenity and Endymion and Endymion’s father: I love that you humanized him, love that you kept him around, made him multidimensional and complicated. I would absolutely love to see more work from you in the future, but either way, thank you so much for this!

Aw! I finally finished binge reading this. thank you, for writing something so wonderful! you did an amazing job developing the world. the fic read almost like a fairy tale.

Hmm... so the King locked himself and his guards in the room and they all slowly starved to death? hmm...

I'm a little confused about the control Diamond had over the king. Does that mean Diamond was controlling the king right from the beginning? or only after he got to serenity? O_o