|Reviews for Daredevil: Weapon of Fate|
| StrawberryDuckFeathers chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
. Gift for Participation in the Reviewathon 2013 . . Fandom-blind .
I love your introduction that puts all the people in control- those we're supposed to trust- in such a negative light, and brings their corruption into the light. However, it seems not all hope is lost as some people are here to conquer that, and I like how that's portrayed. I find it cool how the Demon ends on a more dramatic note, and it's quite ironic as well since I wouldn't see a demon as a person of justice. That's interesting. :) I like the superhero-like drama of the 'prepare for's as well, as if we're on our way to reading the story of a true hero. The character's characterisation is interesting; we can already tell that family is incredibly dear to him, and that even with brains and assuming lots of money from being a lawyer, there's always something to break that feeling that your life is perfect, maybe. I have no concrit for this; you've opened your story up with a bang, and it's definitely got that comic-book kind of feel to it as well, something that I think is quite difficult to put in writing; I can almost visualise the comic panels in my mind reading this. Excellent job and keep up the good work! :D
| Kairan1979 chapter 8 . 1/8/2011
Cancelled? That's too bad.