|Reviews for Tobari Shinobi: Shinou Scandal|
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 9 . 7/14
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 8 . 7/1
First: I think Takuto used Dark Void.
It was okay.
Jun, Hikari and Shinji work really well together.
| cherrypeachblossom chapter 14 . 6/30
I think you should go with the English names but keep the Japanese honorifics. "Upperclassman" sounds weird compared to "Senpai". Most readers probably know the meanings of the honorifics and a lot of stories are like that. Try to keep the region names in English as most readers are used to it.
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 7 . 6/12
Jun WOULD make a big slash. Is the last name for the teacher for the cooking class supposed to be a pun involving Tropius? What's a kouhai?
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 6 . 5/15
Itadakimasu? What does that mean in English? Oh... so Shuu is a prince... interesting.
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 5 . 11/24/2015
Lots of things.
Not right now.
She will compete through it fairly as Hikaru.
In the cabin.
| hanalarene chapter 14 . 11/23/2015
UPDATE PLS HAHAH I WAS SO HAPPY AND THEN IT WAS A MINI POST AND U_U
| Tika Masala chapter 14 . 11/19/2015
Please update this! I was really into this and I would prefer if you use Japanese names 3
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 4 . 11/15/2015
Actually, Jun/Barry has orange eyes.
| CraziOtaku200 chapter 14 . 11/8/2015
I'm fine with the Japanese words. It fits in with the theme and tone of this story much better than the English words. It gives me a more Japanese style samurai feel to this story, you know? So you should keep it. When you turned it to English, the story seemed weird while I read it.
| CraziOtaku200 chapter 10 . 11/8/2015
YUSSSSS... IVE SUSPECTED HIM TO BE HER FATHER FOR A WHILE! And dream to be shinji too! I LOVE THIS!
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 3 . 11/4/2015
Oh, so that's what a shinobi is. So it's now Shuu Rayquaza, Shinji Darkrai, Hikari/Hikaru Cresselia, Satoshi Lugia, Jun Dialga and Kengo Palkia, am I right?
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 2 . 10/18/2015
What's a shinobi? So did Dawn get found out?
The battle between Shinji/Paul and Hikari/Dawn: it was something else.
How Nozomi/Zoey and Hikari met: in this story? Hikari might have traveled.
Four medics: keep her identity a secret and protect Cresselia.
Where Satoshi/Ash and Jun/Barry are: with Takeshi/Brock if he's in this.
Business Shinji has with Reiji/Reggie: something to do with the students?
| LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
That was an interesting chapter.
| Zoe Nightshade21 chapter 14 . 9/22/2015
I like reading the names in Japanese. So far, the story's really good! :)