Reviews for Too Much to Lose
LiveNiceBeBeautiful chapter 16 . 8/28/2011
not trying to be rude but you made a z-ray machine instead of an x-ray
Agent Striker chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
whoa, whoa. now i have just started watching NCIS, but isn't Kate dead by the time Ziva arrives?
Ms. Unlucky chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Okay... Now this was my expression when I first read the end to this: 0.0 WTF? MCGEE YOU JERK! ... And this was my expression when I scanned over it again so I could review it properly: 0.0 WTF? MCGEE, WHY ARE YOU STILL A JERK? xD lol anyways... I do really enjoy the way you wrote this. I think you capture the NCIS characters almost perfectly. Also, I was thinking about hitting up your Harry Potter fanfic... As you know, I just recently finished the series so now I can read it and UNDERSTAND what the heck is going on. ;) Yeah sooo... Hope it doesn't take me a billion years to review that one too, eh? :/ God I hope I don't have procrastinators for reviewers like myself. -.-'' No wonder my teachers get so mad at me... xD
G.K.H chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
not that it isn't the ONLY weird thing about this story- oh, don't worry, weird can be good, so long as it doesn't get cheezy- but, why is kate alive?
latasha chapter 11 . 2/20/2011
csi means crime scene investagation... you can't work for the csi because it not a real place you can get a job at. you can be a crime scene investagator but you have to work for the FBI or CIA. sorry. but you wrote a great story but to make it better you should chanege that one little bit. thanks.
OliviaR5Warbler chapter 23 . 1/3/2011
aww bless. really nice chapter.
Junee chapter 22 . 1/2/2011
Been reading this story...can't wrap my head around it...confusing!Sorry!
OliviaR5Warbler chapter 21 . 1/2/2011
NOOOOOOO(!) cant believe its a cliffhanger. lol. pleeeeaaaasseee update. x
OliviaR5Warbler chapter 15 . 1/2/2011
wow, like it so far. x
OliviaR5Warbler chapter 5 . 1/2/2011
aw bless. that wo a funny chapter ending. xxx
AbbyLovesMcGeeFan chapter 14 . 12/30/2010
Hi Ive been reading all you chapters and I absolutly love it.

It makes me get all teary just thinking about it now!

Your a very expressive and emotional writer and it makes me cry!

I especially love how McGee and Abby got back tgoether thank you so much!
smartkid37 chapter 9 . 12/30/2010
i don't think i've ever seen Tim written so out of character before.

unless he was being forced to drive her away for her own protection - He would never react like that to the news that he was gonna be a dad - and he would certainly never treat Abby that way
hifopea nfl chapter 9 . 12/29/2010
its good but the characters are quite OOC, not sure if that's on purpose. and Kelly died a long time ago, theres no way Abby could'be even met her.

and the little notes shouldnt be in the middle of the story, it just interrupts it. you should put it before or after the chapter.
ladybugsmomma chapter 13 . 12/28/2010
What do you mean Jenny is not the right one for him? I can't wait for the next chapter!
Em chapter 5 . 12/25/2010
I am enjoying this story but I'm annoyed with your notes that are inserted in paragraphs. Please, stop doing that. It takes away from the flow and feeling of the story. If you must make a note, do so before or after you're finished with the story.
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