Reviews for Hoenn Takeover
JulCan1987 chapter 7 . 3/16/2012
When are you gonna update this story, it's too good to be forgotten of?
PianoGirl24 chapter 7 . 7/18/2011
I really like this story! It's really interesting and fun watching May and Dawn and Ben "get along". :D

Plzzzzz update soon! I can't wait to read da next chappie!

~Leafdapple
writlings chapter 7 . 7/16/2011
This story is so cool! Update it will ya?
askthejackfrost chapter 7 . 4/29/2011
Very nice! Back off Dawn! Paul is mine!
Storm Dryu chapter 7 . 4/12/2011
So far pretty good.

maybe the next battle natu is up (type advantage of psychic against poison) against drapion. What i hope is that paul wins or if not, he gets mad at himself and runs off while sulking and dawn comforts him
INSPIRIT99 chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
Not bad can't wait for next one.
splitheart1120 chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
Dawn knows the most about Paul, and is the most open to him...
RS chapter 6 . 1/8/2011
How about they run into a pokemon that throws them into a world of their greatest fears.

It would give you a change to explore what you think Paul's great fear is of all, maybe ending up like his brother, all his pokemon turning on him, ending up as a failer in life?
Idea guy chapter 6 . 1/4/2011
Have Ben and Paul battle in the same scents as in the ep. where Ash got his eight badge.

Va, if you pokemon gets hurt, you get hurt.

It would really affect Paul, and maybe slap some scents into him.
INSPIRIT99 chapter 6 . 1/3/2011
Not bad at all. Well update soon.
mednin chapter 6 . 1/3/2011
I like this story and the cute Paul and Dawn moments. Their all in character and it feels like something that could actually be in the show (besides the gun parts haha, but you know what I mean). Anyways, please keep continuing, this is one of the best ikarishipping fanfictions I've ever read!
splitheart1120 chapter 6 . 1/3/2011
Yay Paul saved them and apologized for a rude comment... (_)
INSPIRIT99 chapter 5 . 1/2/2011
This chapie is good cant wait for NeXT one
mednin chapter 5 . 12/21/2010
Please have Paul come to the rescue, PUH-LEASE!

Anyways, great chapter, hope you update soon :)
oncloudnineandthreequarters chapter 5 . 12/21/2010
this stories so awesome! its perfect just the way it is!
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