Reviews for The Breeding Games
Point-made chapter 23 . 5/7/2014
britana chapter 6 . 11/3/2012
britana chapter 5 . 11/3/2012
Whoa that's W-E-I-R-D First of all Ollie's a girl Next her best friend is a boy (Katniss/Gale)
britana chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
So cool where is the next 1?
KingAlanI chapter 10 . 6/23/2012
Interesting where Peeta vs. Gale is going now.

However, this story still kinda feels like it's missing something to me.
KingAlanI chapter 9 . 6/23/2012
Ollie and Stosh as kind of echoing Katniss and Peeta/Gale? Hmm.

Well, now we have a better picture of what's going on in Districts 14 and 15.

Only two children (population maintenance) rather than a higher number (population expansion)?
KingAlanI chapter 8 . 6/23/2012
interesting continuation of the clinging to/turning to Peeta theme
KingAlanI chapter 7 . 6/23/2012
The plot thickens...

Desperate but necessary? That's what I thought about Coin at first.
KingAlanI chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
interesting mix of present and flashback.

Yeah, Katniss might have to talk Peeta into making that call.
KingAlanI chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
I figured Gale's District 2 work was something secret.

I have a different idea on what it was, but fair enough, ideas on how to fill in the gaps are a huge part of fanfic.

(same goes for a breeding program)
KingAlanI chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
Coin turned out to be no better than Snow; interesting idea that Paylor might turn out to be no better than either.
KingAlanI chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Rebuilding population postwar is a good concept, but I'm not sure if I'm drawn in by your intro.

a couple minor points:

wouldn't textiles have stayed with District 8?

I thought nonvictors like Greasy Sae and her granddaughter came to District 12's Victors Village after the war.
RaspberrySunset chapter 13 . 4/20/2012
Ohhh I ship Stosh and Ollie SO harddd. Haha. anyways, I'm still in chapter 13 but I love this story! I wonder what happens next ;). Kayla

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worriorgirlforever chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I love this story and the idea
IAmShiho chapter 31 . 1/21/2012
I was really surprised how good this was- I actually didn't think it was possible!
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