I like that you used language as the basis for this story. I like what you have done with the characters. You also do a good job setting scenes and transitioning without it feeling robotic or stiff. You are a good writer keep it up.

We need an necromancer to resurrect the Author

hello Author,
you say it's not abandoned but it seems so.. 2012? you being fr? you leave it for 10 years tho... please continue!

great story, please update!

mwahahahaha!

fannon, like many things that only fans of the series could come up with ...
say .. the Magical Core ..

last updated 2012,
its 2022... me thinksy abandoned and that's sad

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

I know that Harry is having the time of his life at the new school (with Hermione) but don't you think that the time has come to reconnect with Daniel Jackson ? Can't wait to imagined the look on his face when he discover the identity of Howard Carter. Good storytelling by the way ! Excelsior !

Please continue this story.

I think Harry is studying his Occlumency, but I don't know. I hope he is.

I am SOOO Bummed that this story is abandoned.

la odie con todo mi corazon, porfavor no vuelvas a escribir nada hasta que te consigas imaginacion. gracias

I hope you find the will to continue this story sometime soon :)

This was such a brilliant story. I m sad you didn't complete it. Please do :(