Reviews for What You Don't Know
Lezli chapter 37 . 9/10
It was a story about sex, basically, but it had such a Disney feeling. I love it.
VanessaCorduroy chapter 37 . 8/25
I loved all of this SO MUCH. It had the perfect balance of hotness, tenderness, happiness and angst, which is exactly what I love.
VanessaCorduroy chapter 31 . 8/25
The queen is so savage, I love it
VanessaCorduroy chapter 3 . 8/21
Oh my gosh, I am LOVING this so far. I know this story is years old now, but it's...hella true to their characterizations even in the tv series now, it's perfect. Also, you blend humor and sexiness really well in these chapters, I can't wait to spend all night reading the rest.
AnonymousNavi chapter 13 . 8/14
HAHAH! I KNEW Pascal was faking. Clever little chameleon. Geez, Eugene. Rapunzel is a LITTLE more understandable, but you sir should know not to assume something like that with out talking to her first. Goddamn.
AnonymousNavi chapter 11 . 8/14
AAHHH HOLY SHIT I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING. I had to put down my phone for a second. I was so stunned.
AnonymousNavi chapter 9 . 8/14
I'm crying laughing. Laughing at Eugene going from etiquette classes to Rapunzel draped unceremoniously in her chair. Laughing at Rapunzel drawing sexy pictures. Laughing at the one picture of Pascal. Oh my goodness.
AnonymousNavi chapter 5 . 8/14
This was so so so precious. Also, wow, Rapunzel is a fast learner, although I guess that's to be expected since she's had to teach herself so many things on her own growing up.
AnonymousNavi chapter 8 . 8/14
I definitely look forward to more of Rapunzel and the Queen's growing relationship and how Gothel's influence plays a part in that. This was just a cute, feel good chapter.
AnonymousNavi chapter 7 . 8/14
Ahhhh Eugene and Queen bondingggggg yeessss! So good.
AnonymousNavi chapter 6 . 8/14
Historically accurate condoms. Nice. Another precious chapter. 3
Guest chapter 37 . 7/30
As the mother of a three-year old who watched Tangled 5x this weekend, this was EXACTLY what I needed. Adult but not too vulgar. You’re a fabulous writer and I read this all in one sitting! Thank you so much for sharing.
StarlingChild4 chapter 37 . 7/23
I spent the last few days devouring your fic, and I gotta say: this is THE best Tangled fic I've ever read. Hell, I'd even put it neck-in-neck with some of the best fics EVER. A few years ago, I didn't think it was possible to read Disney smut fics that were worth reading (without it going into really weird, creepy shit, anyway), until the Frozen fandom came along. Then, I reached out to the Tangled fandom and found its fair share of smut and good fics in general. But yours is one of the best I've read so far.

I absolutely love how, in spite of the more, er, naughty elements, everyone stays exactly in character, just given a more "adult" script. I love how you kept the humor and anthropomorphize Maximus and Pascal in just the right ways. I love how simple and concise your use of language is, while also staying just detailed enough to paint a vivid picture. I love how completely and utterly obliviously NAIVE Rapunzel is, because, naturally, why on earth would Mother Gothel teach her about anything about the human body? It's refreshing how you made Eugene recognize this almost immediately and takes it slow, only pushing as far as Rapunzel wants.

I love the personalities you gave the king and queen, and their bonding with Eugene. I love how you dabble in politics, but also have some leeway with the way the king and queen treat Eugene, because, well, it's still a fairytale kingdom! I love, love, LOVE how you go into both Rapunzel and Eugene's trauma, both in little acts (Rapunzel chirping "I love you more" broke my heart) and in the more extreme panic attacks. It's done tastefully, realistically, but also just gritty enough to be treated seriously.

I could go on and on and on about this fic, but overall, I just have to say THANK YOU for sharing this. Thank you for writing a good, well written, in character Disney smut, that is more than just mindless porn. I was initially rather surprised by the length of your story, but found myself not intimidated at all and just reading chapter by chapter. I'm very glad I gave your story a chance. :)

(And fuck your haters. They need to grow up and recognize the difference between creepy fetishizing and well-written smut. Or just move on if they're not comfortable.)
Guest chapter 37 . 7/5
Wow times 100...dialogue is just as delicious as the smut, and you keep everyone in character but really deepen them...feels like canon to me. Thanks for the ride!
Guest chapter 37 . 6/27
Soo great! My daughter got into these cartoons, and although I like the plot, this story was just what I needed for more... Stimulus :)
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