Reviews for The Garden Of Four
Tilty.bbb chapter 33 . 6/22
This was a fantastic read well done
Ace Trainer Jessie chapter 15 . 6/4
The moment at the end was very bitter sweet. In a great way.
Nyx Muirinn chapter 32 . 5/9
this story is awesome! wish there were more similar to this one XD
Jesseburnett chapter 20 . 3/28
eewwwww... carlisle and esme are in a het relationship? what a couple of WEIRDOS! XD lmao, jk XD
Jesseburnett chapter 20 . 3/28
lmao, everyone really is gay XD whatever right? its just a fanfic 8P not like you have to take it seriously
Jesseburnett chapter 19 . 3/28
beat me or eat me bitch, your choice. XD lmaooo. ...your story is just great, thx again for writing it for us
Jesseburnett chapter 18 . 3/28
really? rose is kind of afraid of bella bc she has a penis? sry to say this, but thats just downright pathetic. its like you're desperately trying to create a little bit of drama in your story, but really its just silly as hell
Jesseburnett chapter 18 . 3/27
who's victoria? bella looked up into victorias glowing gold eyes you said, but i just have no idea who that is tho. i dont believe you've mentioned her before.
Jesseburnett chapter 17 . 3/27
charlie handled renee beautifully XD as sadistic as it is, that whole scene was just awesome XD
Jesseburnett chapter 17 . 3/27
lol, not that im complaining, but is everyone in your story's "world" gay? if so, y did renee reject bella like that? lol
Jesseburnett chapter 16 . 3/27
the pseudo-beastiality is oddly hot XD good stuff
Jesseburnett chapter 14 . 3/27
awww man. shes really gonna look like a cheesy wolfman? laaame
Jesseburnett chapter 15 . 3/27
i forgot to point out the fact that the very few lines rose and vic HAVE gotten so far, is simply them sayin how bad they wanna jump bella's bones. literally. thats it. it just makes them seem like creepers.
Jesseburnett chapter 15 . 3/27
rose and vic are like complete strangers. they arent getting any lines at ALL, even tho they are part of the main pairing. carlisle and emmett are getting the most. jus sayin its a bad idea. wen they start havin sex with the main characters it just isnt gonna feel right
Jesseburnett chapter 13 . 3/27
wow. sorry to critique so much, but do you realize how incredibly stupid it was to have bella say no one deserves to be beat upon, jus to have her punch her so hard she flew back, right after saying it? its weird, you're a very good writer, but sometimes you just fail entirely lol. that said, I'm enjoying your story very much. tyvm for writing it for our reading pleasure 8)
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