|Reviews for Victim|
| Weaving Bard chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
I liked it. Though I really would rather you put some blame on Arthur. He was a bit of a jerk to Morganna more than once. Dismissing her. Dismissing her worries. Just being a bit of a swaggering peacock...
Morganna has been wronged ... and hell hath no fury...after all..
She's great. And Katie really did portray her epically.
I'm ignoring the 5th season. it never happened. Feel free to go all AU on us.
I have theories about dear Morganna.
| The-Lady-Aphrodite chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
This is great! I have to admit, I hated it when they made Uther Morgana's father but this is very well-written!
| Eavis chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Oh, I think it's most probably Merlin's fault. After all, most things seem to be that way, don't they? But anyway. Excellent job - and a sad picture of how often we all blame others for faults that are our own. Though the poor girl did have a rough time of it.
| Nada Themis chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I thought this was pretty cool. I don't think Morgause is dead either, and I think theres a pretty high chance they will both be back.
Anyway, I think your whole idea of Morgana is just funny, and you manage to make her look pretty stupid one way or another.
Great job, again ;)
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I hope Morgause is dead too! It felt very Shakespearian! It was funny and angsty! The best combo!
| xxDodo chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Haha, a drunk Morgana just ranting to some random dude about how unfair her life is _. It just made me give one of those little pity head shakes. You captured her character really well, how she's gone so far that everything is somebody else's fault. Didn't she ever learn to take responsibility for her actions? No? Tsk... :D Brilliant job!
| scientia-potentia-est chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Haha, I was waiting for the twist. Okay, so maybe I wasn't supposed to openly laugh at it, but I remember you telling me it was an angsty-but-kinda-humerous fic, so the whole time I was trying to imagine what the humerous component was. In the end, I imagined her in a psychiatrists office, sitting in the lean back chair and spilling secrets to her hearts content. Your twist, the actual one, was even better :)
Despite the fact that it made me laugh (erm, sorry?) I think that this is a very realistic and elievable take on morgana's viewpoint. The whole externalized blame, and believing herself to be the victim is very Morgana. For someone who hates her so much, you certainly write the character well! Very, very well done Kitty.
| Tianne chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
I can just see her ranting away to some stranger who doesn't really know what she's babbling about but makes the right 'there there' noises! :D
You've captured Morgana's self- centered-ness very well, I think; that trait which she has of blaming everyone but herself,; of thinking only of how events affect her and not how others may feel.
Nice touch with her eyes showing her unstable magic, just like her lack of self control when she's emotional. It works as a nifty little metaphor there!
I'm with you in not believing we've seen the last of Morgause- but you're right... we can hope! :D
| Forbearnan chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
The thought of Morgana getting drunk in a tavern is interesting. Nice fic!
| GeoffreyF chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Oh, interesting. The idea of Morgana going to a tavern and getting drunk is an interesting one (I suppose those lax Camelot guards wouldn't notice her, would they?), and I think her state of mind is fairly convincing. If anything, she's almost not quite angry enough! Anyway, good job!
| z67 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
I rarely read anything related to Morgana, but I really liked this. Morgana is so lost, so uncertain, and that's why she's so easily distracted and pulled into wrong directions.
I felt bad for her in the season finale. I think only Arthur has some kind of power to her anymore - he's the only one who hasn't directedly hurt her, and well Arthur's her brother.
It will be an interesting to see how these two react to each other.
I liked the way you described Morgana's unstable magic, it seems she doesn't have any power over it all whatsoever. Like it would be all triggered through her emotions.
I'm rambling here. But nice take on this, as many of the things that happened to Morgana wasn't exactly her fault.
| Word-Stringer chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
I know it really shouldn't... but that kind of made me laugh... xD
Just the idea of a drunk Morgana thinking it's EVERYONE ELSE'S fault, and they're all thinking: YOU'RE THE ONE THAT BECAME AN EVIL ***** xD
But, yeah, I'm loving how you've written this. theis is probably what that cow is thinking - you got her charcter perfectly, 'cept maybe the drinking, but the death of someone close to you does that Dx