Reviews for Addiction
SexyHikariMalik chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
There is no way you failed this chapter! Everything was awesome and I just HAVE to add this to my favorites bar!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
thx i needed that :D
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
I-

I've read this so many times and haven't reviewed it until now.

The smut is just so perfectly written and hot and I love Mariku being a crazy bitch, it's like I can feel all of her emotions and anger and everything i just asdfghjk.
CloudsOfRabbits chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
For your first time this was pretty fucking great. I gotta say. ]
StillTicksAway chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Points for the frustration of getting masturbation right when you can't find the spot you had seconds ago. But why did Malik need to wait in the locker room? I understand to set up Touzouku's entrance later, but...it seems like a lot of effort on Malik's part to wait in the locker room for hours when she could go home and take a shower. Especially with a glass dildo...

Female domination is hard to portray, and yet...you've done it well (all the more in the next chapter). It is the feeling you were invoking. At the same time, you missed opportunities. They are in a locker room. Shower? More hands. Five fingers can do magic, after all.

The last paragraph was fantastic. "You're so cute."

Cheers and happy writing.
Cliscia chapter 2 . 1/21/2011
G-God I-

I don't know, man. Mariku is such a creepy fuck, jesus she/he will always be a rapist. Seriously, fuck, this was so fucking hot you have no idea. Or maybe you do, since you seem to definitely know how to write girl porn well.

Honestly, I just love reading your femslash fics so much. I'm so sick of ~yaoi~, I love reading your shit where I know what their orgasms feel like and fuck yeah this is so fucking up and amazing. YES YOUR SISTER JUST POPPED YOUR CHERRY, MALIK shit dude everything, I love you.

I also like that you researched for the drug, I love spending time to research for crap like that even though no one would probably notice lolol. No, though, it makes it seem much more raw. This entire fic is raw, it's not dressed up in anything fancy, it just presents itself out there for everything it is. It's pure sexuality and lust and incest and everything, dude.

aldkjflaksjdf;lajsdf I'm so bad at reviews, all I can tell you is just how incredibly hot this is, and that I'm so fucking pissed off that I'm the only one that has reviewed. I'll be putting this in my DA journal or something, I need other people to read this.
Cliscia chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
- Huff.

Huff huff huff this is the sexiest sex scene I have ever read oh god I don't read enough girl porn oh god the description of female masturbation and orgasm is so good of fuck yes man I'm drawing your picture TONIGHT.

smorgasbord

what the hell is that

Touzouku is a sneaky bastard, jesus she's so creepy lolol but I would have watched too. Totally pimping this fic out, man. (I was hoping for penetration but that can come next, yeah?)