|Reviews for The Baggage of Humanity|
| A Concertina chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Am very concerned. Very.
| B chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
"He wondered if his lips tasted anything like his fingers"
HOW I'D LOVE TO SEE A FIC OF THAT! Especially cause there's an abysmal lack of Jake/Ax fic!
This was really cute and well-written and I loved Ax's perspective. His admiration for Jake and those little quirky Ax-like remarks you fitted into the story here and there. Also, I'm hungry now thanks to all that food talk.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Aww, this was so sweet and cute. Wish there was more to it, though!
| xXMistressMadHatterXx chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
This was very sweet. I liked your take on Ax's POV.
| whatnamebutnoname chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Cute. But I can't help but seeing this as a tad bittersweet, for Ax at least.
| Sarah1281 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Oh, this was really sweet. I love that Jake thought to bring Ax some homecooked food. Why did he mention that Ax didn't need to worry because it had no meat, though? Is Jake under the impression that Ax would be uncomfortable with meat or something? Jake/Ax is such an unusual pairing (even if it's so mild and probably one-sided) but I liked it.